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Farmer waiting for the rabbit Farmer waiting for the rabbit Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked in the fields every day. He felt that he was very hard. One day, the farmer was resting under the tree. Suddenly, a rabbit jumped out of the grass and hit the big tree, and it did not move anymore. The farmer saw it and immediately ran over to grab the rabbit, and thinking: It’s good luck today, catching a rabbit without a little effort. As long as I can do this every day, I don't have to work so hard. From then on, the farmer sat under the tree every day, waiting for the rabbit to appear, one day, two days, three days... one month, two months, three months... He waited, waiting until the field was full of grass, still did not wait for the second rabbit.

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Farmer waiting for the rabbit

Farmer waiting for the rabbit
Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked in the fields every day. He felt that he was worked very hard.
One day, the farmer was resting under the a tree. Suddenly, a rabbit jumped out of the grass and hit the big tree, and it did not move anymore.
The farmer saw it and immediately ran over to grab the rabbit, and thinking: It’s good luck today, catching a rabbit without a little any effort. As long as I can do this every day, I don't have to work so hard.
From then on, the farmer sat under the tree every day, waiting for the a rabbit to appear, one day, two days, three days... one month, two months, three months... He waited, waiting until the field was full of grass, and still did not wait for the see OR catch a second rabbit.

blue: optional possible changes. Some people don't like commas before and
", and".
Other people don't mind. Yes, I know I added one of the "and"

orange: corrections
But there are some alternatives.
He felt that he worked very hard. OR He felt that he was very hard working.
Final phrase:
and still did not catch a second rabbit OR and he is still waiting to catch a second rabbit.


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