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Please correct this motivation letter Part 2: In the course of high school, I saw "The Scream" the famous artwork of "Edward Monch" and that was very interesting for me, after that I also read some texts about Expressionism that I found interesting. I would like to know more about it in Germany. Some German artists are my role model and I always try to be like them, e.g. '' Edvard Munch '', '' Albrecht Dürer '', '' Käthe Kollwitz '', in addition contemporary artist like '' Sebastian Krüger ''. Personally, I didn't have a teacher and learned drawing, caricature and cartoon myself, because unfortunately there was no good teacher at the university, but I was able to get to know some masters through Facebook, who helped me. One of the masters works in Hamburg, he already had a workshop at “Medical School Hamburg”, and he recommended this university to me. In addition, I already met some students in social networks who studied in “University of Fine Arts of Hamburg ” and “Udk Berlin”, they were so satisfied with the university and also recommend it to me. Since these universities have an innovative training concept and I will learn there on a very high scientific and artistic level, I think that it is the best way for me to develop myself professionally and personally. For these reasons, I decided to go to Germany to continue my education there. I would also like to point out that after my graduation I would like to return from Germany to Iran to apply my experience and knowledge as a teacher in drawing, or to serve my native country. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely Yousef Alimohammadi

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In the course of On a course I attended at high school, I saw "The Scream", which is the famous artwork of "Edward Monch" and that was very interesting for me, After that I also read some texts about Expressionism that I found interesting. I would like to know more about it in by going to Germany. Some German artists are my role model [better: are role models for me] and I always try to be like them [better: eminate], e.g. '' Edvard Munch '', '' Albrecht Dürer '', '' Käthe Kollwitz '', in addition and also contemporary artists like '' Sebastian Krüger ''.

Personally, I didn't have a teacher and am self-taught in learned drawing, caricature and cartoon myself This is because, unfortunately, there was no weren't any good teachers [better: exceptional teachers in this subject] at the my university, but However, I was able to get to know some [better: a few] masters, through Facebook, who helped me. One of the masters works in Hamburg, he already has a workshop at the “Medical School Hamburg”, and he recommended this university to me.

In addition, I have already met some students in on social networks who have studied in the “University of Fine Arts of Hamburg ” and “Udk Berlin”. They were so satisfied with the university and also recommend it to me.

Since these universities have an innovative training concept, which would enable me to achieve at and I will learn there on a very high scientific and artistic level, I think that it is the best way for me to develop myself professionally and personally. For these reasons, I have decided to come to Germany to continue my education here.

I would also like to point out that after my graduation I would like to return from Germany to Iran to apply my experience and knowledge as a teacher in drawing, or to serve my native country.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to and hope for your positive response.

Yours sincerely,

Yousef Alimohammadi

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