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The Bank hi, I'm very angry today, because I went into the bank to deposit a check and I had to wait a long time....40 minutes!! That's incredible! There was only one box to deposit a check, there were 3 people in the queue before me end there were 5 empty boxes for private customers with the employees to turn their thumbs. I'm very very angry!!!

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The Bank

hi, I'm very angry today, because I went into

[it is correct to use both to and into here because it is possible to deposit a cheque OUTSIDE the back using a cash point machine - in this case I would use "I went TO the bank" - but as you have indicated you went inside the bank to make this transaction, I would say "I went INTO the bank]

the bank to deposit a check [cheque is the British English spelling - I believe check is the way the Americans spell it] and I had to wait a long time....40 minutes!! That's incredible!

In British English - it is ok to use incredible to mean something that is both positive and negative as it purely conveys a state of disbelief. However, to avoid doubt or confusion you might want to be clear that it is negative by saying "That's outrageous!"


There was only one box

[when you say 'box' what do you mean? A desk where a member of staff takes your money? A cash deposit machine where you can insert your cheque and it gives you a receipt or do you literally mean a box in the wall where you post something]


to deposit a check [cheque], there were 3 people in the queue before in front of me e and there were 5 empty boxes for private customers with the employees to turn just twiddling their thumbs. I'm very very angry!!!
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The Bank

hi, I'm very angry today, because I went into the bank to deposit a check and I had to wait a long time....40 minutes!! That's incredible! (Incredible is usually positive, a better word would be "ridiculous")
There was only one box to deposit a check, there were 3 people in the queue before me end there were 5 empty boxes for private customers with the employees to turn their thumbs. (I don't understand this) I'm very very angry!!!
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The Bank

hi, I'm very angry today, because I went into [direi "to" qui ma non un sbaglio] the bank to deposit a check and I had to wait a long time....40 minutes!! That's incredible!
There was only one box to deposit a check, there were 3 people in the queue before me end and there were 5 empty boxes for private customers with the employees to turn their thumbs. twiddling their thumbs I'm very very really angry!!!

Molto bene Leonardo, bravo!

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