Beautiful morning
It'November.The weather is fine.It's only wear short T-shirt in our region.I decided to write a English composition every day.I will try.we have a sports meeting today.I will pulling for them in the football filed in the afternoon.we will eat McDonald's after the end.They new pie is delicious.
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Beautiful morning
It's November. The weather is fine. We have been wearing short T-shirts in our region (these days). I (have) decided to write a English composition every day. I will try. We have a sports meeting today. I will pull for them on the football field in the afternoon. We will eat McDonald's after the game is over. Their new pie is delicious.
Great work, Max! I really enjoyed your entry. I made a few small updates, but one note: "I will pull for them (use the main verb "pull" in "I will pull".) I would enjoy reading more of your entries! Michael
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