My childhood
When I was a child I had a lot of fun, I liked to play with my siblings all the time, every day. We lived in a beautiful place where there was many trees, even fruit trees. Our house was built near by the forest, so we had some contact with animals, but most of the animals were dangerous like snakes and spiders, but It was an amazing adventure for us unless our mother knew, otherwise we were in trouble. Growing among the nature was the best thing that could have happened in my life.
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Good work! You write very well. I just highlighted a few things you should change or remove to sound more natural. I added a few phrasal verbs and split one of the longer sentences. Let me know if you have any questions!
My childhood
When I was a child I had a lot of fun, I liked to play with my siblings all the time, every day. We lived in a beautiful place where there were many trees, even fruit trees. Our house was built near by the forest, so we had some contact with animals, but most of the animals were dangerous like snakes and spiders. , but It was an amazing adventure for us unless our mother found out, then we were in trouble. Growing up close to nature was the best thing that could have happened in my life.
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... there were many trees...
.....then we were in trouble.
Growing up close to nature....
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