An informal e-mail.
Hi Ben,
Sorry that I haven’t been in touch for a while, but I’ve been ill.
As you already know, I’m part of a padel team since last year. I was enjoying a lot with each game every weekend but unfortunately I injured my left shoulder.
I have a lot of pain, I’m having trouble getting dressed in the mornings. Yesterday, I called the traumatologist and he gave me an appointment for tomorrow evening.
Also, I finished my contract as a receptionist and I’ve been very busy submitting c.v. to other hotels.
What about you? In your last e-mail you told me that you moved to another larger apartment. I’m sure you will be more comfortable. Tell me about that in your next message please.
On the other hand, I need your help. Do you remember when you sent me information about the course on tourist accommodation management a few months ago? I’m not able to find the e-mail. Could you forward me it please?
Well, that’s all for now.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kisses.
Criss.
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An informal e-mail.
Hi Ben,
Sorry that I haven’t been in touch for a while, but I’ve been ill.
As you already know, I’m part of a padDLE team since last year. I was enjoying IT a lot with each A game every weekend but unfortunately I injured my left shoulder.
I have a lot of pain, I’m having trouble getting dressed in the mornings. Yesterday, I called the traumatologist and he gave me an appointment for tomorrow evening.
Also, I finished my contract as a receptionist and I’ve been very busy submitting c.v.S to other hotels.
What about you? In your last e-mail you told me that you moved to another larger apartment. I’m sure you will be more comfortable. Tell me about that in your next message please.
On the other hand, I need your help. Do you remember when you sent me information about the course on tourist accommodation management a few months ago? I’m not able to find the e-mail. Could you forward me it please?
Well, that’s all for now.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kisses.
Pretty good
Criss.
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An informal e-mail.
Hi Ben,
Sorry that I haven’t been in touch for a while, but I’ve been ill.
As you already know, I’ve been part of a padel team since last year. I was really enjoying a lot with each the games every weekend but, unfortunately, I injured my left shoulder.
I have am in a lot of pain and I’m having trouble getting dressed in the mornings. Yesterday, I called the traumatologist and he gave me an appointment for tomorrow evening.
Also, I finished my contract as a receptionist and I’ve been very busy submitting my CV to other hotels.
What about you? In your last e-mail you told me that you moved to another a larger apartment. I’m sure you will be more comfortable. Tell me more about your new apartment. that in your next message please. [I'd love to hear more about your new place.]
On the other hand [actually], I need your help. Do you remember when you sent me information about the course on tourist accommodation management a few months ago? I’m not able to find the e-mail. Could you forward me it it to me again, please?
Well, that’s all for now.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kisses,[not sure what your relationship is, but if you are just friends, then kisses is a little too intimate]
Criss.
[Well done. Good grammar and punctuation.
Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.]
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I've been on the paddle team (I don't recognize 'paddle team.' Is that a rowing team?)...I really enjoyed playing every weekend...
I'm in a lot of pain. I have trouble...
(I don't recognize c.v.)
e-mail you told me you moved to a larger...Please tell me...
I do need your help. Do you remember sending me the information...I can't find...
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