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The darkness finds its way The darkness wants to swallow me. It ties me in some way and then sinks me into its deepest self. The only thing I know is that I don't want to be caught. But I don't know how to escape either. I can see it approaching. Slowly. Like an ancient ghost trained to steal the souls from the earth. I wish I could save myself. So I could say for the first time that I'm a true hero. A hero for my own self. My dark and lonely self. But the reality is... That I can't be the hero in a story in which I'm the villain too. (Anyone who could correct this would be an awesome help! Thanks!)

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The darkness finds its way

The darkness wants to swallow me. It ties me in some way and then sinks me into its deepest self. The only thing I know it's is that I don't want to be caught. But I don't know how to escape either. I can see it approaching. Slowly. Like an ancient ghost trained to steal the souls from the earth.
I wish I could save myself.
So I could say for the first time that I'm a true hero.
A hero for my own self.
My dark and lonely self.
But the reality is...
That I can't be the hero in a story in which I'm the villain too.




(Anyone who could correct this would be an awesome help! Thanks!)
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Darkness is temporary. Light will come soon😊😊

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