The darkness finds its way
The darkness wants to swallow me. It ties me in some way and then sinks me into its deepest self. The only thing I know is that I don't want to be caught. But I don't know how to escape either. I can see it approaching. Slowly. Like an ancient ghost trained to steal the souls from the earth.
I wish I could save myself.
So I could say for the first time that I'm a true hero.
A hero for my own self.
My dark and lonely self.
But the reality is...
That I can't be the hero in a story in which I'm the villain too.
(Anyone who could correct this would be an awesome help! Thanks!)
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The darkness finds its way
The darkness wants to swallow me. It ties me in some way and then sinks me into its deepest self. The only thing I know it's is that I don't want to be caught. But I don't know how to escape either. I can see it approaching. Slowly. Like an ancient ghost trained to steal the souls from the earth.
I wish I could save myself.
So I could say for the first time that I'm a true hero.
A hero for my own self.
My dark and lonely self.
But the reality is...
That I can't be the hero in a story in which I'm the villain too.
(Anyone who could correct this would be an awesome help! Thanks!)
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Darkness is temporary. Light will come soon😊😊
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