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A letter to Micky^^
Dear Micky,
Did you know what was happened last night? That was an interesting experience.
Last night, around 20 o'clock,_I was doing my homework. And I got a massage from Chris._I was wondered She told me that she was locked in the school library, and She told me she was behind the book shelves and was starving._I did not know what can I can do at that moment._I tried to call the school number , but no one there answered.
Finally, I decided to call the police._I told them the situation of Chris._They said that they would get her out._After that, I wanted to went go to the school library , but my mom stopped me. She ordered me must finish my homework first. I obeyed her.
But However, I could not pay attention at to my homework. And I born Later, an absurd idea came into my mind: I got out from through the windows in the sneaky way.
Then,_I ran to the library rapidly. When I arrived , one police car was next to the gate. Several polices were in front of the library._When I asked them how is Chris was, they said that they did not know how to bring her out because the door was locked.
I looked around the library._I final found an open window was opened, but with just a small area._I could not open it alone. And I told the police officers. Three policemen and I opened it finally, and Chris got out from the window.
Is it interesting? If you met Chris , you could ask her about that thing,_and I hope that you can write soon tell me about your feeling.
Best wishes,
Sam
N.B.
1. Be sure to leave a space after each full-stop (period).
2. Be sure to have the conjugated verb of "to be" (was, were, etc.) in the clause or sentence when necessary.
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Good day. / 祝 是日安好。
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