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a letter to micky^^ Dear Micky, Did you know what was happened last night? That was an interesting experience. Last night, around 20 o'clock,I was doing my homework. And I got a massage from Chris.I was wondered that she was locked in the school library.She told me she was behind the book shelves and starving.I did not know what can I do at that moment.I tried to call the school number , but no one there. Finally, I decide to call the police.I told them the situation of Chris.They said they would get her out.After that, I wanted to went to the library . But my mom stopped me, she ordered me must finish my homework first. I obeyed her. But I could not attention at my homework. And I born an absurd idea. I got out from the windows in the sneaky way. Then,I ran to the library rapidly. When I arrived , one police car next to the gate. Several polices in front of the library.When I asked them how is Chris, they said they did not know how to bring her out because the door was locked. I looked around the library.I final found a window was opened. But just a small area.I could not open it alone. And I told the polices, three policemen and I opened it finally. And Chris got out from the window. Is it interesting? If you meet Chris , you can ask her about that thing.And I hope you can write soon tell me about your feeling. Best wish, Sam

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A letter to Micky^^

Dear Micky,

Did you know what was happened last night? That was an interesting experience.

Last night, around 20 o'clock,_I was doing my homework. And I got a massage from Chris._I was wondered She told me that she was locked in the school library, and She told me she was behind the book shelves and was starving._I did not know what can I can do at that moment._I tried to call the school number , but no one there answered.

Finally, I decided to call the police._I told them the situation of Chris._They said that they would get her out._After that, I wanted to went go to the school library , but my mom stopped me. She ordered me must finish my homework first. I obeyed her.

But However, I could not pay attention at to my homework. And I born Later, an absurd idea came into my mind: I got out from through the windows in the sneaky way.

Then,_I ran to the library rapidly. When I arrived , one police car was next to the gate. Several polices were in front of the library._When I asked them how is Chris was, they said that they did not know how to bring her out because the door was locked.

I looked around the library._I final found an open window was opened, but with just a small area._I could not open it alone. And I told the police officers. Three policemen and I opened it finally, and Chris got out from the window.

Is it interesting? If you met Chris , you could ask her about that thing,_and I hope that you can write soon tell me about your feeling.

Best wishes,
Sam

 

N.B. 

1. Be sure to leave a space after each full-stop (period). 

2. Be sure to have the conjugated verb of "to be" (was, were, etc.) in the clause or sentence when necessary. 

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Good day. / 祝 是日安好。

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It is an intresting story. You are so good to your friends.

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