64｜Does this sound natural? Please correct my English if it is wrong.
Q: What helped you to unwind today?
A: A boy with his mother were beside me on the bus. He is in his about 5 years old and his voice was sweet like girl. All time he was asking his mother "Why?","What?". The mom looks like sleepy but the boy continued it. Although the bus was crowed, It made unwound atmosphere.
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what does unwind mean here ?
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Hi, I am English and this is how I would have written this.
A mother with her young son were beside me on the bus. He was about 5 years old and had a sweet voice. All the time he was asking his mother questions why? or what? The mum looked sleepy but the boy continued his questioning. It made me smile, relax and unwind after a difficult day.
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