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His name is Fernando and he’s 35 years old Spanish guy, coming from Andalucia, a Spanish region located in the south of the country. He comes exactly from Malaga, but now he’s been living in Madrid for over 20 years. He’s been working in a service company for the same amount of time, covering different jobs over time but always related to customer technical services.
His company is strictly related to a big American corporation, which is specialized in making hardware products such as computers, servers, printers, etc. for business and consumer customers. Specifically, his job now consists in planning and organizing interventions for solving issues which can affect servers functionalities, handling customers’ requests as soon as possible and assuring the engineers can get to the site within the time the customer has requested.
He considers himself stubborn, determinate and imaginative, with a great passion in helping others. In his free-time he likes learning languages, reading, playing videogames and during the week he often likes going for a jog.
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His name is Fernando and he’s a 35 years old Spanish guy, he comes from Andalucia, a Spanish region located in the south of the country. He comes exactly from Malaga, but now he’s been living in Madrid for over 20 years. He’s been working in a service company for the same amount of time, covering different jobs over time but always related to customer technical services.
His company is strictly linked to a big American corporation, which is specialized in making hardware products such as computers, servers, printers, etc. for business and consumers / customers. Specifically, his job now consists of planning and organizing interventions for solving issues which can affect server functionalities, handling customers’ requests as soon as possible and assuring that the engineers can get to the site within the time the customer has requested.
He considers himself stubborn, determined and imaginative, with a great passion for helping others. In his free time he likes learning languages, reading, playing video games and during the week he often likes going for a jog.
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His name is Fernando. He's a 35 year old Spanish guy from Andalucia, a Spanish region located in the south of the country. He is from Malaga, more specifically, but he's been living in Madrid for over 20 years. Fernando has been working in a service company for the same amount of time. There, he's had different jobs over time but always related to customer technical services.
Fernando's company is strictly link to a big American corporation that specializes in making hardware products such as computers, servers, printers, etc. for businesses and consumers. Specifically, his job currently consists of planning and organizing interventions that help solve issues that could affect servers' functionalities, handling customers' requests promptly and assuring that the engineers can get to the site within the time requested by the customer.
Fernando considers himself stubborn, determined, and imaginative. He also has a great passion for helping others. In his free time, he likes learning languages, reading and playing video games. During the week he often likes going for a jog.
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