Search from various English teachers...
South Korea flagEun Lee
Could you please correct this? I'd really appreciate your help in correcting this. Thank you very much in advance. "Is it strange for a man to get a rose gold phone?" I happened to read this comment on the web. Afterwards, I found many men asking if it’s ok to have a rose gold cell phone, watch, or ring, while no women seemed to have such questions. Is there a reason it’s ok for women and it’s not for men? Furthermore, it occurred to me that color stereotypes are firmly gripping us: Blue for boys and pink for girls. Color stereotypes permeate our daily lives without even our being aware of it. I think gender-related color stereotypes are enhanced by the media. Therefore, I chose “gender color stereotypes in the media” as the theme. Does a color indicate gender?

Corrections · 5

0
Could you please correct this?

I'd really appreciate your help in correcting this. Thank you very much in advance.

"Is it strange for a man to get a rose gold phone?" I happened to read this comment on the web. Afterwards, I found many men asking if it was ok to have a rose gold cell phone, watch, or ring, while no women seemed to have such questions. Is there any reason as to why it’s ok for women and it's not for men? Furthermore, it occurred to me that color stereotypes are firmly gripping us: Blue for boys and pink for girls. Color stereotypes permeate our daily lives without even being aware of it. I think gender-related color stereotypes are enhanced by the media. Therefore, I chose “gender color stereotypes in the media” as the theme. Does a color indicate gender?
0
Thank you so much for the comments above, Frazier and Roseline. I feel relieved!
0
Using words like permeate. You're doing alright.
0
It’s actually correct, great job!

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today