Writing training with new vocabulary
We started our hike from a small mountain shelter we spended night. Firstly the path goes through the forest, then leads to alpine meadows dotted with colourfull flowers. After two hours walking you can see dramatic mountain ridge with three summits. There are several popular viewpoints near its foothills. We had to overcome the very steep part of the trail to access one of these breathtaking viewpoints. I was in very good physical condition after intensive trainings during the year and I was really excited with spectacular landscapes. So, I overtook my friends and hurred up to the pass. I expected to see a great panorama view when I reached it. But when I came, the weather turned bad very quickly, so, I've seen only clouds. While I was sitting on the summit and waiting for the weather change, two my friends joined me. We were making coffee at our camping stove when the clouds suddenly parted and we saw a magnificent circular view to all mountain ridge with a formidable highest peak. We reveled this moment and made photo from different points. After half an hour we started to descent with the same path. The return way to the mountain shelter took us about 2 hours. We were tired but very satisfied. This hike was most imposing and memorable in our holidays.
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Writing training with new vocabulary
We started our hike from a small mountain shelter where we spent the night. At firstly the path goes through the forest, then leads to alpine meadows dotted with colourfull flowers. After two hours walking you can see a dramatic mountain ridge with three summits. There are several popular viewpoints near its the foothills. We had to overcome the very steep part of the trail to access one of these breathtaking viewpoints. I was in very good physical condition after intensive trainings during the year and I was really excited with the spectacular landscapes. So, I overtook my friends and hurried up to the pass. I expected to see a great, panoramic view when I reached it, but when I came got there, the weather had turned bad very quickly, so, I've only saw clouds. While I was sitting on the summit and waiting for the weather to change, my two friends joined me. We were making coffee at on our camping stove when the clouds suddenly parted and we saw a magnificent circular view to of all the mountain ridge with a its formidable highest peak. We revelled in this moment and made took photos from different points. After half an hour, we started to descend with the same path. The return way to the mountain shelter took us about 2 hours. We were tired but very satisfied. This hike was the most imposing impressive and memorable part in of our holidays.
Not too bad, Ekaterina. Notice the "ll" in revelled. The Americans spell it with one "l", but the rest of the world with two. ALL countries use a double consonant after a vowel when we want the vowel sound to be short, for example, kitten, compared to kite, which has a long sound.
Training isn't countable.
Just a small thing: we wouldn't normally write numbers numerically, but put the word instead, unless it's a very long number. So "two hours" is preferable.
I hope that helps. Keep practicing! Simón.
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