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Describing cities and places Rome: Rome is the capital and the most populated city of Italy. Also is called “The eternal city’’. There are a lot of touristic places to visit such as the Colosseum, the Pantheon and Castle San’t Angelo. You can see traditional buildings all time. Saint Peter’s Square is inside de Vatican City (The smallest country in the world). Yes, Rome has a city within a city. It has statues of 140 saints from differents ages and places and its architecture is amazing. Sidney. Sidney is the biggest city of Australia and Oceania. There are beachs and national parks with rivers and bays. Australia has some islands in the Pacific Ocean. The Sydney Opera House is a famous building of the century XX. You can find plays, ballet and opera.It is world heritage site.

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In the corrections below "ages" would be ok, but "eras"is a bit better.

Describing cities and places

Rome:

Rome is the capital and the most populated city of in Italy. It is also is called “The eternal city’’. There are a lot of touristic places to visit such as the Colosseum, the Pantheon and Castle San’t Angelo. You can see traditional buildings everywhere all time. Saint Peter’s Square is inside de Vatican City (which is tThe smallest country in the world). Yes, Rome has a city within a city. It has statues of 140 saints from differents eras ages and places, and its architecture is amazing.

Sidney.

Sidney is the biggest city of Australia and Oceania. There are beaches and national parks with rivers and bays. Australia has some islands in the Pacific Ocean. The Sydney Opera House is a famous building of the 20th century XX. There Yyou can see find plays, ballet and opera. It is a world heritage site.
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Just a remainder: you can omit subject in Spanish because the verb conjugation tells you everything about that subject, i.e. - "Comí arepas ayer" is obviously referring to "(Yo) comí arepas ayer." You cannot do that in English. So you have to say "it is called the city of..." instead of "is called the city of..."

Also, here is another difference between Spanish vs. English. Example: "Mi hermano es periodista" but you cannot say "My brother is journalist." You have to say "My brother is a journalist." That's why you have to write "It is a world heritage site" instead of "it is world heritage site."



Describing cities and places

Rome:

Rome is the capital and the most populated city of Italy. Also it is called “The eternal city’’. There are a lot of touristic places to visit such as the Colosseum, the Pantheon and Castle San’t Angelo. You can see traditional buildings all the time. Saint Peter’s Square is inside of the Vatican City (The smallest country in the world). Yes, Rome has a city within a city. It has statues of 140 saints from different eras and places and its architecture is amazing.

Sidney.

Sidney is the biggest city of Australia and Oceania. There are beaches and national parks with rivers and bays. Australia has some islands in the Pacific Ocean. The Sydney Opera House is a famous building of the century XX. You can find plays, ballet and opera.It is a world heritage site.

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