Hello! Could you check the article, please? Travel I want to visit the United States. I interest four places. First of all I will visit to the Statue of Liberty. I want to see this monument because it

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Hello! Could you check the article, please? Travel I want to visit the United States. I interest four places. First of all I will visit to the Statue of Liberty. I want to see this monument because it’s a main America symbol. The statue stay on the a small island in area of New York, near Manhattan and Brooklyn. This monument has height 305 feet from ground. It built in 1886. I want to walk along Wall Street in Manhattan because it’s a main economic street of America and all world. I want to visit the White House in Washington because my friends Donald and Melanie live and work there. Future of the world are making in the building. Last point of my travel is Monument Valley. You can find this place between states Arizona and Utah. I will see huge red mountains there. We all know this place from American westerns which showed a cowboys life to us.

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Hello! Could you check the article, please?

Travel

I want to visit the United States.

I am interested in four places.

First of all I will visit to the Statue of Liberty. I want to see this monument because it’s a main American symbol. The statue is on ~~the~~ a small island in New York, near Manhattan and Brooklyn. This monument has height of 305 feet from the ground. It was built in 1886.

I want to walk along Wall Street in Manhattan because it’s a main economic street of America and all the world.

I want to visit the White House in Washington because my friends Donald and Melanie live and work there. The future of the world is being made in that building.

Last point of my travel is Monument Valley. You can find this place between the states of Arizona and Utah. I will see huge red mountains there. We all know this place from American westerns which showed a cowboy's life to us.

You're doing really well! Keep up the great work.

Hope this helps,

Jake

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