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HELP!! A reference letter from an program advisor(for graduate program application in US) To whom it may concern, I am pleased to strongly recommend Ms. Shuting Du for the acceptance to your distinguished graduate program through this letter. As her research project advisor, I believe that my evaluation for her will objectively facilitate your understanding of her research potential and overall competitiveness. In March 2017, the second semester of her freshman year, I made my acquaintance with Shuting since she expressed her willingness to conduct a research project with me. Impressed by her unwavering desire to hone her hands-on skills and by her keen interest in research, I decided to guide her on the project entitled “Automatic Tracking Car with Remote Control Function based on Visual Recognition”. This project involved Mecanum wheel theory and application, SCM application and programming with Keil, image detection and extraction methods and programming with Matlab and OpenCV. Shuting is a quick learner and has persistence in solving problems. Specifically, most of her major courses were related to electronic devices, and she had less experience in algorithms. However, in her spare time, she actively learned OpenCV additional dependencies on her own and managed to apply it to the car. This car was composed of two parts, namely, tracking armor with Robomaster and binocular ranging with stereovision related algorithms and OpenCV functions. All the tasks to achieve the two parts were excellently done by Shuting. Through optimizing algorithms as encountering code problems, she achieved that the car could automatically recognize and track the armor and obtain the correct distance in the end. The final remarkable results of this project brought them the award of the National-level Innovation and Entrepreneurship Training Program for College Students. Apart from her solid learning ability and technical skills, she communicated well with other team members, consulted with an open mind, which helped her get into the team quickly. Moreover, she proactively discussed with experienced team members when encountering problems. In the final project closing stage, she even took the initiative to share responsibility for the complicated project materials sorting and final report writing and layout. This well demonstrated a strong sense of teamwork of her. Finally, I recognize Ms. Shuting Du as a highly-motivated student with self-confidence, strong learning capability, positive attitude toward science and solid technical skills in hardware design,

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HELP!! A reference letter from a program advisor (for graduate program application in US)

To whom it may concern,

I am pleased to strongly recommend Ms. Shuting Du for the acceptance to your distinguished graduate program through this letter. As her research project advisor, I believe that my evaluation for of her will objectively facilitate your understanding of her research potential and overall competitiveness.

In March 2017, the second semester of her freshman year, I made my acquaintance with Shuting since she expressed her willingness to conduct a research project with me. Impressed by her unwavering desire to hone her hands-on skills and by her keen interest in research, I decided to guide her on the project entitled “Automatic Tracking Car with Remote Control Function based on Visual Recognition.” [If this school is in the US, you will want to put the periods inside the quotation marks. The English put the period outside the quotation mark. Although most academic people will recognize this as a cultural difference, it's always good to follow the customs of the country.] This project involved Mecanum wheel theory and application, SCM application and programming with Keil, image detection and extraction methods[,] and programming with Matlab and OpenCV. [I suggested the extra comma because you have a long, complicated list and I think it helps define it better. But I made it a suggestion because I am not familiar with the terms and I wasn't sure which things in the list went together. ]

Shuting is a quick learner and has persistence in solving problems. Specifically, most of her major courses were related to electronic devices, and she had less experience in algorithms. However, in her spare time, she actively learned OpenCV additional dependencies on her own and managed to applied it to the car [research]. This project [research] was composed of two parts, namely, tracking armor [I know very little about the research subject, but I am concerned about the use of armor. Is it an armored car? Reinforced to withstand bullets?] with Robomaster and binocular ranging with stereo vision related algorithms and OpenCV functions.

All the tasks to achieve the two parts were excellently done by Shuting. Through optimizing algorithms as encountering code problems [this phrase sounds weird, but since I am completely ignorant of the subject matter, I am very little help with the words. I don't understand the relationship between the algorithms and the code problems from how you have it written. I want to take out the word "encountering," or maybe it is the format of the word that doesn't agree. Do you mean that you "encountered code problems" and used algorithms to overcome the code problems? Or are they two separate activities?], she achieved found that the car could automatically recognize and track the armor [again this doesn't seem like the right word, but I'm not sure because of the technical nature of the research. It sounds like you mean the "perimeter" or "exterior."] and obtain the correct distance in the end. The remarkable final results of this project brought them the were awarded of the national-level Innovation and Entrepreneurship Training Program for College Students.

Apart from her solid learning ability and technical skills, she communicated well with other team members. She consulted with an open mind, which helped her get into the team quickly. Moreover, she proactively discussed problems with experienced team members when encountering problems. In the final project closing stage, she even took the initiative to share responsibility for sorting the complicated project materials [does "project materials" mean "data" from the research? An experiment always creates data that has to be sorted, arranged, presented, and reported.] sorting and the writing and layout of the final report writing and layout. This well demonstrated a strong sense of teamwork of her.

Finally, I recognize Ms. Shuting Du as a highly-motivated student with self-confidence, a strong learning capability, positive attitude toward science and solid technical skills in hardware design.

[Overall, very good. This is so technical that it is very difficult. I hope this helps. I feel like I wasn't as useful with this one because of the technical language. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections or suggestions.]

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