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Salary This month, my son has finally received his salary for the first time in his life. He has been so excited about this long time. He says his salary seems to be deposited on his bank account on 25th of every month. So he went to the bank and checked the details of bank account yesterday. However, he couldn't find record his company paid on the payday for some reason. As he seemed like unrest, I asked him that you were expecting someone today. Apparently, he already ordered his favorite chair and a special display for video game online even though he had yet to get his salary. They were delivered at my house today. So he owed my wife some money. He is going to inquire his company about this issue the first thing in the morning tomorrow, but I pray that he will be able to find out his salary somehow and withdraw money from his account. For now, I will wait for returning his rent to us one day without expectation. Wish me luck(haha) !

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This month, my son has finally received his salary for the first time in his life. He has been so excited about this for a long time. He says his salary seems to be deposited on in his bank account on the 25th of every month. So he went to the bank and checked the details of his bank account yesterday. However, he couldn't find a record that his company paid on the payday for some reason. As [you can also use "Since"] he seemed like unrest worried, I asked him that you were if he was expecting someone something today. Apparently, he already ordered his favorite chair and a special display for video game online online video gaming [or "gaming online"] even though he had yet to get his salary. They were delivered at to my house today, so he owed my wife some money. He is going to inquire to his company about this issue the first thing in the morning tomorrow, but and I pray that he will be able to find out about his salary somehow and withdraw money from his account. For now, I will wait for returning his rent to us one day without expectation. [For now, I will wait for him to repay his rent to us one day without expectation.] Wish me luck (haha)!

I really liked your short story! It was well written and there were only a few grammar mistakes that are easy to fix. Good job!

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