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Arbortion nowadays The SC is clearly in favor of pro-life people by this decision, which is contradictory since the Court recognizes the right to abort at the same time. This Supreme Court decision last year raises the question of whether the Supreme Court will not overturn the "Roe versus Wade" case in the future and ban totally the right to abortion? First, the judge Anthony Kennedy announced in June 2018 his retirement. And Brett Kavanaugh replaced him. Kavanaugh is a close friend of Trump, he is very conservative and pro-life. So today, on 9 judges of the SC, 5 are conservative. So the majority in SC is conservative and these judges can largely endanger the law that protects the right to abort. In addition, since 2019, 14 states have signed laws to limit access to abortion or measures that encourage not to abort. For example, in May 2019, the Alabama Senate passed the most repressive anti-abortion law in the United States. A doctor who performs an abortion could incur 99 years in prison. The purpose of the authors of this law is to go to the Supreme Court and overturn “Roe versus Wave” case. Thus, it would have the effect of prohibiting the right to abortion throughout the United States. This text has been denounced by Amnesty International, because forbid abortion in all the USA would be a real regression for women's rights. Amnesty explains that the consequences of the anti-arbortion law in Alabama will be disastrous because on the one hand it threats the lives of pregnant women and on the other hand doctors and other health personnel may be criminally prosecuted for doing only their work by giving care.

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Arbortion nowadays

The SC is clearly in favor of pro-life people going by this decision, which is contradictory since the Court recognizes the right to abort at the same time.

This Supreme Court decision last year raises the question of whether the Supreme Court will not overturn the "Roe versus Wade" case in the future and totally ban the right to abortion? First, the judge Anthony Kennedy announced in June 2018 his retirement and Brett Kavanaugh replaced him. Kavanaugh is a close friend of Trump, he is very conservative and pro-life. So today, out of the 9 judges of the SC, 5 are conservative. So the majority in the SC is conservative and these judges can largely endanger the law that protects the right to abort.
In addition, since 2019, 14 states have signed laws to limit access to abortion, or measures that encourage not to abort. For example, in May 2019, the Alabama Senate passed the most repressive anti-abortion law in the United States. A doctor who performs an abortion could incur 99 years in prison. The purpose of the authors of this law is to go to the Supreme Court and overturn the “Roe versus Wade” case. Thus, it would have the effect of prohibiting the right to abortion throughout the United States. This text has been denounced by Amnesty International, because forbidding abortion in all the USA would be a real regression (or "setback") for women's rights. Amnesty explains that the consequences of the anti-arbortion law in Alabama will be disastrous because on the one hand it threats the lives of pregnant women and on the other hand, doctors and other health personnel may be criminally prosecuted for simply doing only their work by giving care.

Really good, Alexia.
At the start of the text you use SC. I would put Supreme Court before you use an abbreviation.
We wouldn't normally write numbers numerically in a text - better as words, unless it's a really big number!
An interesting essay. Keep practicing. Simón.
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Hello Alexia, Though it is technically correct, I would recommend replacing "right to abort" or "abort" with phrases like "the right to choose" or "have an abortion" or "terminate a pregnancy." These phrases frame the issue as the right to opt for a medical procedure. I appreciate you have chosen this subject - it's an important one! Best wishes, Rumana

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