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When I was in the supermarket my sister called me in order I buy her a wine and some cans of beer. I could't find a wine that she wanted and I spent many time to see the one on a shelf. I was a little angry because I don't like to buy alcohol, I wished to leave the supermarket without alcohol, but I didn't want to frustrate my sister, meantime her birthday soon. I decided to continue a research and as result I bought her only 4 cans. It was hard to find a wine, but worked together we found a beer. I think every similar case can makes me better if I try to cooperate with someone, I develop my communication skills and patience.
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When I was in the supermarket, my sister called me in order to ask me to buy her some wine and some cans of beer.
I spent a lot of time searching, but I could't find any wine that she wanted. and I spent many time to see the one on a shelf.
I was a little angry because I don't like to buy alcohol. I wished to leave the supermarket without alcohol, but I didn't want to frustrate my sister since her birthday was soon. meantime her birthday soon.
I decided to continue searching a research and as a result, I bought her only 4 cans.
It was hard to find a wine, but at least worked together we found a beer.
I think every similar case situations like this one can make me better. If I try to cooperate with someone, I develop my communication skills and patience.
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If you are going to use the article "a" before "wine" in this case, it is better to write "a bottle of wine". Otherwise, use "some" or just "wine". These examples are all correct: 1) buy her a bottle of wine 2) buy her some wine and 3) buy her wine. :) For beer, similarly, you can just write "some beer" or just "beer". Hope that helps!
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