when I moved to a city
Three years later, I moved to a city with my parents. It smelled strange. However, I couldn’t speak it out. Pedestrianes were zigzagging through the human traffic, jostling others. A high-heeled young lady ignored my big smile, wedging herself into the elevator. Residents were living in a “bird cage” where you had no idea who was your neighbor or friend. People were more like ghosts lingering on the street in the morning and snails in the evening. Almost everyone seemed in a floating island, they wanted to yell but their voices were fading away in air. Every one is an inaccessible island in a more connected cyberspace. I was lost.
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when I moved to a city
Three years later, I moved to a city with my parents. It smelled strange. However, I couldn’t speak it out (Not sure what you are trying to say... maybe a good substitution is "put my finger on it"). Pedestrians were zigzagging through the human traffic on the sidewalk, jostling others. A high-heeled young lady ignored my big smile, wedging herself into the elevator. Residents were living in a “bird cage” where you had no idea who was your neighbor or friend. People were more like ghosts lingering on the street in the morning and like snails in the evening. Almost everyone seemed to be on a floating island; they wanted to yell but their voices were fading away in the air. Everyone is an inaccessible island in a more connected cyberspace (Again not sure what you mean by this, it's not carrying the meaning you might have intended. Maybe try something like "Everyone seemed to be on a remote island despite being part of a seemingly well connected cyberspace"). I was lost.
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