Teenegers and housework
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Teenagers and young people should share housework with their parents?
Notes:
1- Introduction: Most parents think teenagers should share housework.
2- who has more time for housework.
3- Young people spend time on computer games instead share housework. The solution will be a rota.
4- Conclusion.
Most parents say that their sons and daughters should do part of housework like lay the table, make the bed and pick up their books or clothes. Some of them get their children do that chores, but many others don't. Children say they have a lot of homework so they haven't time for housework.
On the other hand, it is true that teenagers and young people usually have homework and activities after school consequently, they don't have much time to do the chores. Also, parents think that if their children had to do homework or to prepare an exam they shouldn't spend time on housework. What is more, young people say that they aren't very good doing housework and their mother does housework better and faster than them.
On the other hand, young people have time for playing computer games, use whatsapp or others social networks. They claim they are very young, so they need free time to enjoy. However, parents need to relax after working for that reason it is very important to share housework.
One solution could be to make a rota where each one involves on some chores and compromise to achieve.
In conclusion, it's a sensitive issue which many times annoy parents and children, but if we cooperate everyone should be able to enjoy their free time!
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I did my best in the corrections but "rota" is not a word that is used in English. What did you mean by the word?
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Teenagers and housework
This is homework.
Could someone correct this entry, please?
Thank you very much.
Should teenagers and young people share housework with their parents?
Notes:
1- Introduction: Most parents think teenagers should share housework.
2- Who has more time for housework.
3- Young people spend time on computer games instead of sharing housework. The solution will be a rota.
4- Conclusion.
Most parents say that their sons and daughters should do a portion of the housework like setting the table, making their bed and picking up their books or clothes. Some parents get their children do those chores, but many others don't. Children say that they have a lot of homework so they don't have time for housework.
On the other hand, it is true that teenagers and young people usually have homework and activities after school and consequently, they don't have much time to do chores. Also, parents think that if their children have to do homework or to study for an exam, they shouldn't spend time on housework. What is more, young people say that they aren't very good at doing housework and their mother does housework better and faster than they can.
On the other hand, young people have time for computer games, Whatsapp or other social networks. They claim that they are very young, so they need free time for fun. However, parents need to relax after working and for that reason it is very important to share housework.
One solution could be to make a rota where each one involves on some chores and compromise to achieve.
In conclusion, it's a sensitive issue which many times annoy parents and children, but if we cooperate, everyone should be able to enjoy their free time!
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