The place that opens my life’s journey
A lot of things fade from memory as one's life experiences accumulate. But some memory will withstand the wear and tear of time. I can still recall the class which opens a new world for me.
Last year, I worked in a Children’s Palace as a teaching assistant of an American teacher named Shelly. My job was to interpret what she had said to the children who were still very young. I thought it was as easy as pie since my knowledge of English can’t be that lacking to fail to explain kids’ stuff. Apparently, it’s more than enough, as least I believed so.
But the first class embarrassed me. In the middle of the class, Shelly described animals with gestures and let the children guess. She said, “It looks like a large cat and runs very fast. What’s it? ” A little boy broke in, “It’s a cheetah.” I faked a smile so as to hide my confusion. I thought he could say “lion”, a word of his level. I didn’t know that word he meant. Shelly nodded with satisfaction, “yeah, very good, you are correct.” She sensed my hesitation for I didn’t say anything for quite a long time. And then she moved on to the next topic. At that moment, a sense of guilty took hold of me for my previous bias that the children were no better than me.
The class finally came to an end. I quietly went to the desk of that boy and asked him in such a low voice that can be barely heard, my face blushed. He told me immediately the Chinese translation. I then searched on my cellphone. Yes, a new word for me. Indeed, it’s a new world.
True to say, that’s a lesson for them as well as for me. Age can be a disguise of one’s ignorance, not something to be proud of. By no means is it an indicative of one’s knowledge. In the class, I learn a word which opens a world for me, a world awaiting me to start my life journey with an open mind.
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The place that opens my life’s journey
A lot of things fade from memory as (one's) life experiences accumulate. But some memories will [with]stand the [wear and tear]/test of time. I (can) still recall the class which opened a new world for me.
Last year, I worked in a Children’s Palace as a teaching assistant [of]/to an American teacher named/called Shelly. My job was to interpret/translate what she had said to the children who were still very young. I thought it [was]/would be as easy as pie, since my knowledge of English can’t be that lacking/poor to fail to explain kids’ stuff. [Apparently,] [it’s]/It was more than enough, [as]/at least I believed so.
But the first class embarrassed me. In the middle of/Halfway through the class, Shelly described animals with gestures and let the children guess what they were. She said, “It looks like a large cat and runs very fast. [What’s]/What is it? ” A little boy broke in, “It’s a cheetah.” I faked a smile (so as) to hide my confusion. I thought he [could]/would say “lion”, a word [of]/at his level. I didn’t know [that]/the word he [meant]/used/came out with. Shelly nodded with satisfaction, “yeah, very good, you are correct.” She sensed my hesitation [for]/as I didn’t say anything for quite a long time. And then she moved on to the next topic. At that moment, a sense of guilty took hold of me, for my previous [bias]/belief that the children were no better than me.
The class finally came to an end. I quietly went to the desk of that boy and asked him in [such] a low voice that [can]/could be barely heard, my face [blushed]/blushing. He told me immediately the Chinese translation. I then searched on my cellphone. Yes, a new word for me. Indeed, it’s a new world.
True to say, [that’s]/that was a lesson for them as well as for me/for me as well as for them. Age can be a disguise of/cloak for one’s ignorance, not something to be proud of. By no means is it an [indicative]/indication /a measure of (one’s) knowledge. In the class, I learn a word which opens a world for me, a world awaiting me to start my life journey with an open mind.
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