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Beauty and the Beast Correct my mistakes please! I think that my favorite movie is a cartoon Beauty and the Beast. It is my favorite Disney movie since childhood. It is a beautiful story about a simple modest girl who falls in love with a person who looks like a real monster, the Beast. But actually he was not a beast always. In past he was arrogant, he lived selfish life and once he refused a beggar woman in shelter in return for a rose. After that the old woman revealed her true identity - she was a beautiful enchantress. And because the prince had lack of compassion to old and poor people she punished him by transformed into the beast and gave him a rose telling that if he wants to return a human look back he must find a true love, a girl who would truly love him despite his hideous look. And if he wont, he would stay a beast forever. So one day a beautiful girl named Belle come up in his castle to save her father and in return to free him from the Beast's capture, she agreed to stay in the Beast's castle. Firstly she didnt like him because she was scared by him which is obvious because he looked like a monster. But over time they found out that they have a lot in common. My favorite scene in the cartoon was the eating scene. Since the Beast has huge paws he was so clumsy with eating with a spoon, so when he tried to use a spoon there was just a huge messy. And in this scene we can see that Belle is a little confused but she took a step towards him and put away a spoon, take a plate by her hands and actually drunk a porride from a plate. And I think that this very scene shows us how it is important to be kind to people, to have compassion, put yourself into people's shoes and see the best in people no matter how they look like. Because in the end, the Beauty, Belle found out that the Beast is a gentle, kind man with a soft heart. She truly fell in love with him and the enchantress's spell was broken - the Beast was turned back into a handsome prince, the household objects were turned back into servants and it is the happy end. I think that the main massage of this cartoon is just don't judge people with their appearance, be kind and patient to people and it is the only way to live live happily after after.

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Beauty and the Beast

Correct my mistakes please!

I think that my favorite movie is a cartoon called Beauty and the Beast. It is my favorite Disney movie since childhood. It is a beautiful story about a simple modest girl who falls in love with a person who looks like a real monster, the Beast. But actually he was not always a beast. In the past he was arrogant, he lived selfish life and once he refused shelter to a beggar woman in return for a rose. After that the old woman revealed her true identity - she was a beautiful enchantress. And because the prince lacked compassion to old and poor people she punished him by transforming him into the beast and gave him a rose telling that if he wants to return to being human he must find a true love, a girl who would truly love him despite his hideous looks. And if he doesn't, he would stay a beast forever.

So one day a beautiful girl named Belle came upon his castle to save her father. In return for freeing him from the Beast's capture, she agreed to stay in the Beast's castle. Initially, she didnt like him because she was scared of him which is obvious because he looked like a monster. But over time they found out that they have a lot in common.

My favorite scene in the cartoon was the eating scene. Since the Beast has huge paws he was so clumsy with eating with a spoon, so when he tried to use a spoon there was just a huge mess. And in this scene we can see that Belle is a little confused but she took a step towards him and put away the spoon, picks up the plate with her hands and actually drinks the porridge from the plate. And I think that this very scene shows us how it is important to be kind to people, to have compassion, put yourself into people's shoes and see the best in people no matter what they look like. Because in the end, the Beauty, Belle found out that the Beast is a gentle, kind man with a soft heart. She truly fell in love with him and the enchantress's spell was broken - the Beast was turned back into a handsome prince, the household objects were turned back into servants and it is a happy ending. I think that the main massage of this cartoon is just don't judge people by their appearance, be kind and patient with people and it is the only way to live live happily ever after.

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