Technology and how we have the false idea that we understand it
When we speak about technology the majority of people thinks in the products that we comsume, as laptops, smarthphones, tablets, and all those gadgets that the big companies try to sell us, with a high percent of exit, with the argument that possesing one or many of these devices give us acces to the progress, but, in my very personal opinion, the fact of have one of these products don't really mean that we are involving in the progress or development of the advance, when we pay for the new Iphone or samsumg or huawei or whatever that was the brand that we preffer because make us feel better or smarther, or handsome or important, we are only been spectators, we only consume a product, in that way we are not so much different of a pet that wait patiently for his food or maybe a prize, we don't have knowledge of how these devices work, we don't know what are the technologys that power our world, we don't compren the algoritms based in old psicological theorys, that are designed to automate and program our behaviour.
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Technology, and how we have the false idea that we understand it
When we speak about technology, the majority of people thinks in about the products that we comsume, such as laptops, smartphones, tablets, and all those gadgets that the big companies try to sell us, with a high percentage (or "degree") of exit success, with the argument that possessing one or many of these devices will give us access to the progress, but, in my very personal opinion, the fact of having one of these products doesn't really mean that we are involved in the progress or development of these advances, when we pay for the new Iphone or Samsumg or Huawei or whatever that was the brand that we prefer, because it makes us feel better or smarter, or handsome or important, we are have only been spectators, we only consume a product, in that way we are not so much different from a pet that waits patiently for his its food or maybe a prize reward, we don't have the knowledge of how these devices work; we don't know what are the technologies that power our world, we don't comprehend the algorithms based on old psychological theories that are designed to automate and program our behaviour.
Hola José, no está mal. Cuidado con el articulo "the". Hay algunas palabras que has traducido directamente, (éxito - success).
Echa un vistazo al texto otra vez - ¡creo que es todo una sola frase! Busca donde puedes meter un punto.
De todos modos, bien hecho y sigue practicando.
Saludos desde España. Simón.
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