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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a chinese boy. I am 28 years old. I am an English translator in a very big company in jilin city of China. I am so enthusiatic with me job. Because I like do that for the pleasure. My hobbies are like reading, learning foreign languages and playing basketball. Because my major is English, So I like to learn any other foreign languages, like french, german, korean, japanese and spanish. But I like korean the most, because I like the accents of the korean. So I will learn it more in my spare times. I like playing basketball and playing the computer games about the sports. Do you like them? They are really so fun to me. I will play them when I have much free time. I have a harmonious family. My father, mother and grandpa. They are still in their good health. Although we are not a rich family, but not poor either. So we are financially secure. So we don't worry about our daily life.I can tell you that although our chinese are so conservative for the intimacy relations. it doesn't mean that we don't know how to show our passionate love and comforts to my future lover, I think you may find the right man, because I am not a dull man and like ordinary and never changeable life. I know that what is the real love to me and how to make my lover more and more happy when we are together.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a  28 year old Chinese boy  and  I am an English translator for  a very big company in  the  city of Jilin in China. I am  very enthusiatic about  my job,  because I like doing for pleasure.

My hobbies are like reading, learning foreign languages and playing basketball. Since my major is English, I like to learn other foreign languages, like French, German, Korean, Japanese and Spanish. But I like Korean the most, because I like  Korean accents. So I will learn more  about it in my spare time.

I like playing basketball and playing the computer games  sport. Do you like sport? They are really  fun for me and I play them when I have free time.

I have a harmonious family. My father, mother and grandpa. They are still in  good health. Although we are not a rich family,  we are not poor either. So we are financially secure. So we don't worry about our daily life.

However, I can tell you that theChinese are very conservative  when it comes to talking about intimate relations. It doesn't mean that we don't know how to show our passionate love and comfort a  future lover, I think  that if you need to find the right man.  I am not a dull, ordinary  man  who never changes in  life. I know what  real love  is and how to make my lover more and more happy each time that  we are together.

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1 correction only.

"I am a chinese boy. I am 28 years old."
You are too old to be a boy, you are a man. A man is usually older than 18 years old, a boy is younger than 18 years old.

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