Theatre Yesterday
Most of my class in performing arts thought that the play we saw yesterday wasn’t really exciting. Even the teacher thought it was boring as well, although there were some funny moments during the play.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
0
Theatre Yesterday
Most of my class in performing arts class thought that the play we saw yesterday wasn’t really exciting. Even the teacher thought it was boring as well, although there were some funny moments during the play.
All changes are optional. That is, the writing is excellent. The two changes might be slight improvements, depending on your point of view.
I must say that I don't agree with the other correction - I would leave the "although", I think it is perfect in the sentence.
0
Theatre Yesterday
Most of my class in performing arts thought that the play we saw yesterday wasn’t really exciting. Even the teacher thought it was boring as well, although there were some funny moments during the play.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
