Agree or disagree: More Japanese people will move to the countryside after they retire in the future
Although some people have been moving to the countryside after they retired, the majority of people don't move to other regions. As shown in researches about increase and decrease of population, Countrysides have been losing their population. So I disagree this suggestion.
To begin with, People who have lived a lot of time in modern city created many family and friends in the region. It is difficult to throw away this relationships to relocate to the countryside.
Moreover, Moving and living costs in new location take huge amount of money. This become one of walls to hesitate to judge.
To summarize, mental and economical obstructions make only few people moved to the countryside. Due to this, More Japanese people will not move to the countryside.
Please tell me the proper way to write this and correct the writing.
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Agree or disagree: More Japanese people will move to the countryside after they retire in the future
Although some people have been moving to the countryside after they retired, the majority of people don't move to other regions. As shown in researches about increase and decrease of population changes, Countrysides have been losing their population. So, I disagree this suggestion.
To begin with, for Ppeople who have lived spent a lot of time in a modern city created filled with many family and friends in the region., It is difficult to throw away this these relationships in order to relocate to the countryside.
Moreover, Mmoving and living costs in new location take huge amount of money. This become one of walls the obsticles to hesitate to judge decide.
To summarize, mental and economical obstructions make cause only few people moved to the countryside. Due to this, Mmore Japanese people will not move to the countryside.
Please tell me the proper way to write this and correct the writing.
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