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Film stars get paid too much money Dear native speakers, please check my text, so I can improve: "Film stars get paid a lot of money. Is the amount of money they are getting way too big? Or it just right compares to the job they do? Some say they work very hard and they deserve it. On the other hand, a lot of people work really hard and those people get paid much less. In my opinion, film stars get those money because they are hard to replace. It's just how the market works. Furthermore, film companies make a lot of money so there is no reason for the government to limit film stars payment."

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Film stars get paid too much money

Dear native speakers, please check my text, so I can improve:

"Film stars get paid a lot of money. Is the amount of money they are getting way too big much. Or it Or is it just right compares compared to the job they do?

Some say they work very hard and they deserve it. On the other hand, a lot of people work really hard and those people get paid much less.

In my opinion, film stars get those money because they are hard to replace. It's just how the market works. Furthermore, film companies make a lot of money so there is no reason for the government to limit film stars payment."
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