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Indonesia flagindah kartika
only hope Now, I'm really bored. Then, i listening to the music. Then, i'm feel better. Now playing "ONLY HOPE ".it is sung by Mandy Moore. I like it. So calm and deep.It is soundtrack of "A WALK TO REMEMBER". It's teenager story about love. But i'm not know deeply about that story. I want to watch it soon. And i trying to download it. But it's failed. Huhuhu, it's make me angry. >:( I hate it , but maybe i can download it tommorow.

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thanks for your correction :D it's help me :) oke, thanks for your recommend
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I have some other teenage love stories-comedies for you to watch: Clueless, Mean girls, Freaky Friday. Good luck. :)
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Only hope by Mandy Moore

Now, I'm really bored, so I listening to the music. Then, I feel better. Now I am listening to "ONLY HOPE" by Mandy Moore. I like it. It is so calm and deep. It is a soundtrack to the movie "A WALK TO REMEMBER". It's a teenager story about love. But I don't not know deeply the story. I want to watch it soon and I am trying to download it. Unfortunately, the downloading has failed. Huhuhu, it make me angry. >:( I hate it, but maybe I can try to download it tommorow.

My dear friend,

It is a very nice piece of writing just keep in mind that every English sentence should have a verb, and it is not common to start your sentence with the conjunction 'and', 'and' is used to continue the sentence.

With best wishes, Katya.

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thanks for your correction :D
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only hope

Now, I'm really bored. So, I am listening to the music. Then, I feel better. Now playing "ONLY HOPE ". it is a song by Mandy Moore. I like it. So calm and deep.It is in the soundtrack of "A WALK TO REMEMBER". It's teenage love story. But I'm don't know much about that story. I want to watch it soon.  I'm trying to download it. But it failed. Huhuhu, it's making me angry. >:(
I hate it , but maybe I can download it tommorow.

Very good, i know native speaker dont often capitalize words when typing informally but i corrected yours just to remind you. :) great job.

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