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Only hope by Mandy Moore
Now, I'm really bored, so I listening to the music. Then, I feel better. Now I am listening to "ONLY HOPE" by Mandy Moore. I like it. It is so calm and deep. It is a soundtrack to the movie "A WALK TO REMEMBER". It's a teenager story about love. But I don't not know deeply the story. I want to watch it soon and I am trying to download it. Unfortunately, the downloading has failed. Huhuhu, it make me angry. >:( I hate it, but maybe I can try to download it tommorow.
My dear friend,
It is a very nice piece of writing just keep in mind that every English sentence should have a verb, and it is not common to start your sentence with the conjunction 'and', 'and' is used to continue the sentence.
With best wishes, Katya.
only hope
Now, I'm really bored. So, I am listening to the music. Then, I feel better. Now playing "ONLY HOPE ". it is a song by Mandy Moore. I like it. So calm and deep.It is in the soundtrack of "A WALK TO REMEMBER". It's teenage love story. But I'm don't know much about that story. I want to watch it soon. I'm trying to download it. But it failed. Huhuhu, it's making me angry. >:(
I hate it , but maybe I can download it tommorow.
Very good, i know native speaker dont often capitalize words when typing informally but i corrected yours just to remind you. :) great job.
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