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Have you ever watched a football match like the cruel one depicted in the drawing?Three sons and a daughter, faced with their father, are like guard players on the football playground.And below the drawing,there is a captain which reads:a football match of "raising aged parents".Undoubtedly, the drawer is attempting to call attention to a prevalent social phenomenon of filial piety.
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Have you ever watched a football match like the cruel one depicted in the drawing? The three sons and a daughter facing with toward(s) their father are like guard players goalkeepers/goalies on the football field playground. And Below the drawing, there is a caption which reads: a football match of "raising aged parents". Undoubtedly, the drawer artist/illustrator is attempting to call attention to a prevalent social phenomenon of filial piety. [1]
[1] When you call attention to something, it is generally because it has adverse effects on society, etc. So maybe you could consider: Undoubtedly, the artist is calling attention to the lack of filial piety prevalent in society, etc.
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Nice work! This composition doesn't quite reach the minimum word count (if that's not what you're looking for, ignore this). You could possibly add your comment on this illustration/issue and also elaborate on its description. I hope this helps!
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