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Informal letter to my friend Alex Hi Alex! This sounds great, first of all, congratulations man! I know you have been working hard these last two months to pass the exam, so I’m really proud of you. Well, it is true that you need some new clothes (Do you only have football team T-shirts? I’ve never seen you dressed up, except in your sister’s wedding) but if I were you, I’d wait until your birthday, I’m sure you will get it. Now is the time to have a reward, it’s time to splash out and buy a new computer! (Also, your current computer is a scrap, remember all the online games playing together where you took off?) So, if you need about my knowledge in computers, I can go with you to the shop (I recommend you the MediaMarkt store), let me know! See you soon!

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Thanks to Matt for doing the hard work. I just changed a couple things from his. My changes and comments are in blue.

Informal letter to my friend Alex

Hi Alex!
This sounds great, first of all, congratulations man!
I know you have been working hard these last two months to pass the exam, so I’m really proud of you.
Well, it is true that you need some new clothes? Do you only have football team T-shirts? I’ve never seen you dressed up, except at your sister’s wedding, but if I were you, I’d wait until your birthday, I’m sure you will get it. (What does "it" refer to here? Money, clothes? Then maybe change it to some gifts.) Now is the time to reward yourself, it’s time to splash out splurge and buy a new computer! Also, y Your current computer is a s crap, remember all the online games playing together where you took off? (Took off isn't clear in this case. Maybe "where you dissapeared" or "where your computer crashed")

So, if you need about my knowledge in computers, I can go with you to the shop. I recommend you the MediaMarkt store, let me know!
See you soon!
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Informal letter to my friend Alex

Hi Alex!
This sounds great, first of all, congratulations man!
I know you have been working hard these last two months to pass the exam, so I’m really proud of you.
Well, it is true that you need some new clothes? Do you only have football team T-shirts? I’ve never seen you dressed up, except at your sister’s wedding, but if I were you, I’d wait until your birthday, I’m sure you will get it. Now is the time to reward yourself, it’s time to splash out and buy a new computer! Also, your current computer is a scrap, remember all the online games playing together where you took off?

So, if you need about my knowledge in computers, I can go with you to the shop. I recommend you the MediaMarkt store, let me know!
See you soon!

Sugerencia... no usa comas , no es necesario y parece mal ingles.


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