IELTS Cambridge 13 test 1 Writing Task 1
The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, bus stops had been removed, and the previous car park had been changed. A new bus station had been added. There were also changes in both ends of Hospital Road. Except for these changes, Ring Road and City Road had been maintained.
In the map of 2007, there were 6 bus stops on the west and east sides of Hospital Road. To its east, there was a car park for both hospital staff and the public.
In comparison with the first map, the second one had removed all the bus stops but added a bus station to the west of Hospital Road. In addition, on the northern and southern ends of this road, two roundabouts were built. In terms of the car park, only hospital staff had access to it. A new car park for the public was constructed to the east of the hospital. Apart from these changes, other parts of this map remained the original situations as the 2007 map.
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IELTS Cambridge 13 test 1 Writing Task 1
The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, bus stops have [I think the present perfect is better because you are describing what has happened to create the current situation] been [were--simple past would be fine here too] removed, and the previous car park has been [was] changed. A new bus station has been [was] added. There were also changes in both ends of Hospital Road. Except for these changes, Ring Road and City Road have been maintained.
In the map of 2007, there were 6 bus stops on the west and east [both--just a simpler way of describing where the bus stops are located] sides of Hospital Road. To the [we always use the definite article when describing direction] east, there was a car park for both hospital staff and the public.
In comparison with the first map, the second one has removed all the bus stops but has added a bus station to the west of Hospital Road. In addition, on the northern and southern ends of this road, two roundabouts were built. In terms of the car park, only hospital staff had access to it in 2007. A new car park for the public was constructed to the east of the hospital. Apart from these changes, other parts of this map remained the original situations same as the 2007 map.
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