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Life obstaclesRecently, I have a inhibit. I live in an apartment that makes me feel troublesome. I option that a good environment makes me triumph over any overwhelming failures. However, in this term, I move into an apartment called "hell". Every day, I am upset and regret. In large, my apartment has given me nothing but headaches. My landlord has been uncooperative. In the winter, the house is extremely piercing cold. The house has not ground heating, I suggest that we can have ground heating. But she said we don't need even the temptation is under the 0. As a result, I had to buy ground heating spent a lot of my money. I also have problems with the janitor. He always opens my express without permission. I told to him over and over don't open my express. Sometimes, he said it is not important if you express have not involved risky things. Even then he will steal a part of precious thing.The worst trouble is with the neighbors who live above. They play music loudly at midnight at all times. Something even more outrageous they dance all night. My apartment is surrounded by all these troubles, which make me think about moving out
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Life obstacles
Recently, I have a inhibit (?). I live in an apartment that makes me feel irritated.
(Troublesome means it causes trouble. "The apartment is very troublesome. It makes me feel irritated.")
I option (?) that a good environment allows me to triumph over any overwhelming challenges. However, in this term, I moved into a hellish apartment. Every day, I am upset and regretful. In large, my apartment has given me nothing but headaches. My landlord has been uncooperative. In the winter, the house is extremely piercingly cold. The house has not ground heating, I suggest that we get ground heating. But she said we don't need it even though the temperature is below the 0.
(Temptation = 诱惑, temperature = 温度)
As a result, I had to buy ground heating and spent a lot of my money. I also have problems with the janitor. He always opens my express (?) without permission. I told to him over and over: don't open my express. Sometimes, he said it is not important if you express have not involved risky things (?). Even then he will steal a part of precious thing.The worst trouble is with the neighbors who live above me. They always play music loudly at midnight at all times. What is even more outrageous is that they dance all night. My apartment is surrounded by all these troubles, which make me think about moving out.
[嗨,有的部分不太清楚,给我中文翻译,我就纠正!]
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