有关健康的生词
1。抽烟对身体健康没有好处。
2。看病的时候医生做出诊断吗?
3。昨天骑车的时候我掉下来了、受了伤,甚至不得不叫救护车。
4。昨天你没上课因为发烧了,但是今天你看起来健康的。你假装了吗?
5。我禁止你来我的家,我生病,可能传染你。
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有关健康的生词(句子)
1。抽烟对身体健康没有好处。(yep!很棒)
2。看病的时候医生做出诊断吗?(【你/我/Ta 看病的时候医生做出诊断了吗?】——In this sentence, do you want to say that "did the doctor make a diagnosis when your felt ill and asked for a medical service", I add a "了" to indicate a enquiry about the result happened within a past perfect tense grammar structure, actually I suggest there need a subject, such as "你看病的时候医生做出诊断了吗" in case the sentence to be misleadingly unfulfilled)
3。昨天骑车的时候我掉下来了、受了伤,甚至不得不叫救护车。(【昨天我骑车的时候掉了下来,受了伤,伤情甚至严重到不得不叫救护车。】 (1)when there is a sequences of actions happened on a single subject(我、你他/她/它), the best solution is to put the subject at the first place if you want to omit it later, otherwise listeners might feel confused about that in a long sentence; (2) in Chinese, the punctuation of "、" means a slight-pause mark used to set off items in a series ,so since it is neither several strict item noun or gerundial phrases, you might need to think twice about whether it is appropriate being used here. Even that, it is applaudable of you to use it, that's great! (3) if you want to strengthen the seriousness of your hurt, you can put it clearly by adding the rest grammar parts, after all, we can all understand what you want to express!)
4。昨天你没上课因为发烧了,但是今天你看起来健康的。你假装了吗?(【昨天你没来上课说是因为发烧,但是你今天看起来挺健康的,难道你是假装生病吗?】 in this sentence, there exist tense switching and potential hypothesis of "you pretend to claim ill to escape class, yesterday, but actually you seem to be quiet healthy". Thus in the first part, I add the elements of "you claimed that you had a fever" and omit you since the single subject has appeared before; I also add a "挺" pretty healthy to express a potential suspicious mood and in the last part I therefore suggest you use a rhetorical phrase to escalate your suspicious question )
5。我禁止你来我的家,我生病,可能传染你。(【我不希望你来我家,我生病了,可能传染给你】 禁止——prohibit, is too hard to be used for a close friend, thus I use I don't want you to come to my home to soften the language environment especially when you already have been very sick; the "了" gives the result of where comes your reason)
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these five sentences might be heard within a couple of familiar native speakers, elements omitted and subjects misplaced, and it less likely to influence message transfer process; but you have to admit that they are not totally grammar correct or contextually fulfilled. Don't worry, there always exist gaps between oral and written languages. Good Luck!
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有关健康的生词
1。抽烟对身体健康没有好处。
2。看病的时候医生做出诊断了吗?
3。昨天骑车的时候我掉下来了、受了伤,甚至不得不叫救护车。
4。昨天你没上课因为发烧了,但是今天你看起来是健康的。你是装的吗?
5。我禁止你来我的家,我生病了,可能会传染你。
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有关健康的生词
1。抽烟对身体健康没有好处。
2。看病的时候医生做出诊断吗?
3。昨天骑车的时候我掉下来了、,受了伤,甚至不得不叫救护车。
4。昨天你没上课因为发烧了,但是今天你看起来(是)健康的。你(是)假装(的)吗?
5。我禁止你来我的家,我生病(了),可能(会)传染你。
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