The beginning of the text
The beginning of the text
Before the text was invented, people had to remember that things were very inconvenient. Some people used knots to make notes, big things to tie the big knots, small things to tie the small knots, and there were too many big and small things in life, and finally, anything doesn't remember. Later, some people thought that they could draw what they saw, the round sun, draw a day, a semi-circular moon, draw a month, and people draw three sharp-horned mountains and four square of fields, everyone found that things in life can be written down. Then one word after another, it was slowly created by people.
文字的開始
文字還沒有發明以前,人們要記事情很不方便,有人用打結來記事,大事情打大結,小事情打小結,生活中發生的大事小事太多,大大小小好多節,最後都記不得是什麼事了. 後來有人想到可以把看到的東西畫下來,圓圓的太陽,就畫個日,半圓的月亮,就畫個月,還有人畫出三個尖角的高山和有四個方格的田地......有了文字以後,大家發覺生活中的事情,都可以記下來.於是一個又一個的文字,就這樣被人慢慢的造出來了.
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The beginning of the written word
The beginning of the written word
Before the written word was invented, people had to remember that things which was were very inconvenient. Some people used knots to make notes, big things to tie the big knots and small things to tie the small knots. and There were too many big and small things in life and finally, anything doesn't remember. Later, some people thought that they could draw what they saw. For example they drew the round sun to indicate a day or a semi-circular moon to mean a month. and people draw three sharp-horned mountains and four square of fields, People everyone found that things in life can be written down. Then one word after another writing was slowly created by people.
A nice idea for a short essay. Try and keep your structures simple, good writing is all about simplicity.
The following piece is a complex sentence from a famous author "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife." do not let your structures get any more complex than that. If in doubt shorten sentences.
"text" is open to misinterpretation so use "the written word".
文字的開始
文字還沒有發明以前,人們要記事情很不方便,有人用打結來記事,大事情打大結,小事情打小結,生活中發生的大事小事太多,大大小小好多節,最後都記不得是什麼事了. 後來有人想到可以把看到的東西畫下來,圓圓的太陽,就畫個日,半圓的月亮,就畫個月,還有人畫出三個尖角的高山和有四個方格的田地......有了文字以後,大家發覺生活中的事情,都可以記下來.於是一個又一個的文字,就這樣被人慢慢的造出來了.
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The beginning of the text/the begining of writing
The beginning of the text
Before the text was invented, people had to remember that things were very inconvenient. Some people used knots to make notes reminders, big knots for big things, small knots for small things but and there were too so many big and small things in life that finally, anything doesn't nobody remembered anything.
Later, some people thought that they could draw what they saw : the round sun draw for a day, a semi-circular moon for a month and people drew three sharp-horned mountains and four square of fields, and everyone found that things in life could be written down. Then one word after another, writing was slowly created by people.
文字的開始
文字還沒有發明以前,人們要記事情很不方便,有人用打結來記事,大事情打大結,小事情打小結,生活中發生的大事小事太多,大大小小好多節,最後都記不得是什麼事了. 後來有人想到可以把看到的東西畫下來,圓圓的太陽,就畫個日,半圓的月亮,就畫個月,還有人畫出三個尖角的高山和有四個方格的田地......有了文字以後,大家發覺生活中的事情,都可以記下來.於是一個又一個的文字,就這樣被人慢慢的造出來了.
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Fantastic! It sounds a bit like a Roald Dahl story - the begining is so funny (in a good way) ! My grandmother used to tie a knot in her hankie : )
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