Making breakfast for the first time
Making breakfast for the first time
I walked gently to the table this morning.
Put the toast and cheese on the table.
First I use strawberry jam and paint a big love on the toast.
This is my mother's favorite.
In that toast and cheese, make a square castle, this is father's breakfast.
Finally, I put the peanut butter on the golden toast and it tastes fragrant.
The breakfast I made must be delicious.
This is my first time making breakfast for my family.
In a moment, when Mom and Dad see it, Isn't know what do they want to say?
Mom and Dad, this is my breakfast. Hope you have a wonderful start today, BeiBei October 1.
第一次做早餐
今天早上我輕輕地走到餐桌邊，
把土司果醬和起司都放在桌上。
我先用草莓果醬，在吐司上塗一個大大的愛心，這是媽媽的最愛。
在那土司和起司，做出四四方方的小城堡，這是爸爸的早餐。
最後我把花生醬塗在金黃色的土司上，味道香香的。我做的早餐一定好吃。這是我第一次為家人做早餐。等一下，當爸爸媽媽看到了，不知道他們會說什麼呢？爸爸媽媽這是我做的早餐，願你們今天有一個美好的開始 貝貝留10月1日
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(I just wanted to say that this is a sweet account of you making breakfast! I'm assuming you want this in the past tense so here we go)
I'm making breakfast for the first time:
I walked gently to the table this morning.
Then, I put the toast and cheese on the table.
First, I used strawberry jam to paint a big heart on the toast.
This is my mother's favorite.
On that toast and cheese, I made a square castle; this is father's breakfast.
Finally, I put the peanut butter on the golden toast and it tasted delicious.
The breakfast I made must be delicious.
This was my first time making breakfast for my family.
In a moment, when Mom and Dad see it, I wonder what they are going to say? (=What are they going to think?)
Mom and Dad, this is my breakfast. Hope you have a wonderful start to you day,
BeiBei October 1.
第一次做早餐
今天早上我輕輕地走到餐桌邊，
把土司果醬和起司都放在桌上。
我先用草莓果醬，在吐司上塗一個大大的愛心，這是媽媽的最愛。
在那土司和起司，做出四四方方的小城堡，這是爸爸的早餐。
最後我把花生醬塗在金黃色的土司上，味道香香的。我做的早餐一定好吃。這是我第一次為家人做早餐。等一下，當爸爸媽媽看到了，不知道他們會說什麼呢？爸爸媽媽這是我做的早餐，願你們今天有一個美好的開始 貝貝留10月1日
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Making breakfast for the first time
Making breakfast for the first time
I walked gently to the table this morning.
Put the toast and cheese on the table.
First I use strawberry jam and paint a big heart on the toast.
This is my mother's favorite.
On that toast and cheese, make a square castle, this is father's breakfast.
Finally, I put the peanut butter on the golden toast and it tastes delicious. (the word fragrant is used for smell)
The breakfast I made must be delicious.
This is my first time making breakfast for my family.
In a moment, when Mom and Dad see it, do they know what they want to say?
Mom and Dad, this is my breakfast, hope you have a wonderful start today.
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