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House House. When I'm just thinking about it, my soul is getting good. House is more than just a dwelling, it's a set of characteristic whitch make the dwelling magic, evoke warm feelings in a person. There are two groups of characteristics that the house should possess. 1) The house is a place of power. It's like comfortable hugs. When I fall into those hugs I feel warm, calm and safety. There are things and memories thouse are dear to my heart. House fills me love and gives me peace. 2) The house is a dwelling that functions without harm for nature and person. It's not agaist environment, it don't hurt it. The house and the nature are in harmony. The main motto of the house is "Don't harm". Most people could name their dwellings "HOUSE" only partially. They love their dwellings all their souls, but just a few people think about love to the nature, about health safety and respect for the environment. Unfortunatly my dwelling is not respectfull to the naturale, but I really want to change the situation. I dream to have the real house: comfortable, safe and ecological.

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The House

The House. When I just think about it, my soul feels better. is getting good.
The House is more than just a dwelling, it's a set of characteristics which makes the dwelling magic, evokes warm feelings in a person.

There are two groups of characteristics that the house should possess:


1) The house should be a place of power. It's like a comfortable hug. When I fall into those hugs I feel warm, calm and safe. There are things and memories that are dear to my heart. The house fills me with love and gives me peace.

2) The house is a dwelling that functions without harm for nature and for people. It does nothing against the environment, it doesn't hurt it. The house and the nature are in harmony. The main motto of the house is "Don't harm".

Most people could name their dwellings "HOUSE" only partially. They love their dwellings with all their soul, but just a few people think about love towards the nature, about health safety and respect for the environment.

Unfortunately my dwelling is not respectfull towards nature, but I really want to change the situation. I dream of having a real house: comfortable, safe and ecological.

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Yay! That was not an easy topic. I found the ideas here quite beautiful indeed.









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