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Dear Mr. Hall Dear Mr. Hall, How are you? Tomorrow is the the Dragon Boat Festival. This is one of the Chinese Festivals. I want to invite you to enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival with my parents and I. If you agree my inviting, My parents will go home with you on that day. After that, You can make zong zi with our, you can enjoy there things happy. During lunch. You can eat that yourself make zong zi. After lunch, You can drink tea with my father and play chess. My mother will go shopping, if you want to go shopping, you can see the street to have a fun. When the dinner's time, we can eat good food and watch TV shows. If you want to agree my inviting, you can use E-mail to me. I look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Dear Mr. Hall, How are you? Tomorrow is the the Dragon Boat Festival. This is one of the Chinese Festivals. I would like to invite you to enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival with my parents and me. If you accept my invitation, my parents will invite you to their home. You can make zong zi with our family and enjoy yourself. (?)You can eat the home-made zong zi for lunch. After lunch, you can drink tea with my father and play chess. My mother will go shopping,. if you would like to go shopping, you can go out into the streets to have fun. (?) When it's dinner's time, we can eat good food and watch TV shows. If you would like to accept my invitation, you can email me. I look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

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Dear Mr. Hall,
How are you? Tomorrow is the the Dragon Boat Festival. This is one of the Chinese Festivals. I want would like to invite you to enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival with my parents and I me.
If you agree accept my inviting to my invitation, Mmy parents will go home with you on that day. invite you to their home. After that, You can make zong zi with our family you can enjoy there things happy. and enjoy yourself. (?) During lunch, You can eat that yourself make the home-made zong zi for lunch. After lunch, Yyou can drink tea with my father and play chess. My mother will go shopping,. iIf you want would like to go shopping, you can see the street to have a fun. go out into the streets to have fun. (?)
When the it's dinner's time, we can eat good food and watch TV shows.
If you want would like to agree my inviting accept my invitation, you can use E-mail to email me. I look forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua

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