JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I might write down here in speaking way, possibly, because I want to improve not just writing skills, but also skill of speaking English Can you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
The brand-new series of Pokemon is coming soon here. It has been about 4 years since launched the last one of Pokemon, so those who are a huge fun of the game or character can't be wait the release date. Of course so do I. I am one of among those people, and for me, I was raised by with watching that anime and I always do play the game of those series. Yes, I am already adult as not enough to call me young children, I mean 25 years old, so you guys might think of me that I almost middle-aged man lol. And I know myself that every game is created by for children. But I can't helped to play that when that is on sale. I have one thought on Pokemon however. I am wondering if those game are not so much the games for children as those for adult. They are adult-oriented I think. You know, this game concept is really profound, that means, the gamer all of the world would be into that world of game. If anything, Nintendo, where Pokemon was born at, might intend so.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write down here in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also the skill of spoken English Can you Could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
The brand-new series of Pokemon is coming soon here. It has been about 4 years since they launched the last one of Pokemon, so those who are a huge fan of the game or characters can't be wait for the release date. Of course, I can't either. I am one of among those people, and for me, I was raised by with watching that anime [you could just say 'Pokemon', or 'this'] and I always do play the games in those series. Yes, I am already an adult, too old not to be called a young child, I mean I am 25 years old, so you guys might think of me as almost a middle-aged man lol. And I know myself that every game is created by for children. But I can't helped to play that when that is on sale. I have one thought on Pokemon, however. I am wondering if those games are not so much the games for children as they are for adults. They are adult-oriented, I think. You know, this game concept is really profound, because this means, that gamers all over the world would be in the world of that game. If anything, Nintendo, where Pokemon was born at, might intend [this to be] so.
Well done Taichi, and an interesting topic.
-Sarah
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I might write down here in speaking way, possibly, because I want to improve not just writing skills, but also skill of speaking English Can you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 9th
The brand-new series of Pokemon is coming here soon here. (More natural to put 'here' before 'soon'. Also, 'here' is not necessary - it can be dropped.) It has been about 4 years since launched the last one of Pokemon was launched, so those who are a huge fun of the game or character can't be wait for the release date. Of course so do I I am one of those fans. I am one of among those people, and for me, I was raised by with watching that anime, and I always do play the games of those series. (Alternatively and a little better: '...I always play those games series') Yes, I am already an adult as not enough to call me young children so too old to be called a child anymore. I mean, I am 25 years old, so you guys might think of me that I as almost a middle-aged man, lol. And I know myself that every game is created by for children, but I can't help to play them (Even better to say '...I can't help but play them ...) when they are on sale. I have one thought on Pokemon, however. I am wondering if these games are not so much the games for children as those games for adults. (Better is, 'I am wondering if these games are not so much games for children, but really games for adults.') They are adult-oriented, I think. You know, this game concept is really profound so well designed that all the gamers of the world are into it. into that world of game. If anything, Nintendo, where Pokemon was born, might have had that intention.
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The brand-new series of Pokemon is coming here soon. It has been about 4 years since the last Pokemon was launched, so those who are a huge fun of the game or character can't wait for the release date. Of course, I can't either. I am among those people, and for me, I was raised watching that anime and I always play the games in those series. Yes, I am already an adult, too old not to be called a child anymore. I mean, I am 25 years old, so you guys might think of me as almost a middle-aged man, lol. And I know myself that every game is created for children, but I can't help but play them when they are on sale. I have one thought on Pokemon, however. I am wondering if these games are not so much games for children, but really games for adults. They are adult-oriented, I think. You know, this game concept is really so well designed that all the gamers of the world are into it. If anything, Nintendo, where Pokemon was born, might have had that intention.
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