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The environment come into fashion The environment is on everyone's lips today, from chindergarden to the nursing home for the elderly. But why now and not already much before? The importance of the environment has been known from everyone since we were born, but it was also kind of a habit and a matter of course. Who said in the past, that he or she prefers to cycle to work instead of taking the car to safe the nature was smiled at as well as people who carried about endangered animals. Meatlovers felt sad for vegetariens and so on. But nowadays, It's kind of cool to be a vegetarian or even a vegan. We all care about our nature now, we try to safe what is possible. But I find it a bit questionable, why people react only when responsibility become kind of fashion. Hopefully, this trend will continue for a long time.

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The environment comes into fashion

The environment is on everyone's lips (minds is used more) today, from kindergarden to the nursing home for the elderly. But why now and not already much earlier? The importance of the environment has been known by everyone since we were born, but it was also kind of a habit and a matter of course (don't understand "matter of course"). Who said in the past (no comma) that he or she prefers to cycle to work instead of taking the car to save the nature (or the environment) was smiled at as well as people who cared about endangered animals. (this is not a complete sentence and I don't know how to fix it. It is not clear what the subject or the verb is) Meatlovers felt sad for vegetariens and so on. But nowadays, It's kind of cool to be a vegetarian or even a vegan. We all care about our nature now, we try to save what is possible. But I find it a bit questionable (no comma) why people react only when responsibility becomes a kind of fashion. Hopefully, this trend will continue for a long time.

good job, i do see some german in your writing especially with commas. Commas are used less often in English and differently. I'm still learning how to use german commas :)

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