Describe my sister
My sister is very generous, she likes to help other people. She feels good about it. Also, she is barely ever grumpy, she is almost always cheerful. I like how she seems so reliable. She always travels by herself. She is so trustworthy. She hates lying to others because she thinks that's extremely atrocious. She is not a nosy person but she is instead quiet person. She likes to socialize and learn how other think.
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Rowena seems to have done a great job. Without reading it too cloesly,. I'll also try to see if you get some diversity of answers.
A description of my sister
My sister is so generous because she likes to help other people. She feels relieved with good about that. Also, she is rarely barely to be grumpy. She is always cheerful and charismatic. I like how she seems so reliable. She always travels by herself. She is so trustworthy. She hates lying to others because she thinks that's a very atrocious. She is not a nosy person but, instead, she is down to earth. She is so chatty a person as well. She likes to be outgoing and discover how people think people's thinking.
I've stayed close to your wording, but Rowena's comments about better words are all true.
"so generous" is not incorrect, but less likely than "very" without some prior context.
Similar comment about "so trustworthy" and "so chatty"
"so" can be used in this way for "very" but less likely.
"charismatic" is explained by Rowena. Not incorrect, but less likely than her suggestion as it is sort of saying two quite different things about the sister in one sentence.
atrocious iis strong, so don't really need "very" with it.
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Describe my sister
My sister is very generous, she likes to help other people. She feels good about it. Also, she is barely ever grumpy, almost always cheerful and exuberant. I like how she seems so reliable. She always travels by herself. She is so trustworthy. She hates lying to others because she thinks that it's atrocious. She is not a nosy person but is instead down to earth*. She is a really chatty person as well. She likes to socialise and learn how others think.
['charismatic' isn't really an emotional state, more of a part of who someone is. So it's better to choose a mood-related word.
*down to earth isn't the opposite of nosy. And the way the sentence is built, it should be two opposite or balancing concepts. Eg, "Rather than greedy, she is generous".]
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