JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 2nd
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I might write down here in speaking way, possibly, because I want to improve not just writing skills, but also skill of speaking English Can you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 2nd
I went to a hot spring today as I wanted to feel relaxed so much. I got actually a lot of painful from my work everyday, and as you might know I have a routine that I have to work out on the day off work. So that's why I got tired everyday, and then the feeling that I want to get relaxed at a hot spring come up to my mind. But where I went to today was not just a hot spring. It was a public bath, Japanese calls. And plus the public bath I went to has a hot spring. So, besides I could take variety of bathes, I enjoyed a hot spring. Okay, now listen, I will tell you my steps from now on. First thing first, I will wash my body, because dirt my body from my work or working out get into public bath, and it is really mannerless thing I think. Secondary, I take a bath finally, but if it has a onsen, like hot spring there, I would head to onsen there, secondary. Oh I've forgotten the thing I have tell you. Having a sauna bath is really indispensable thing for me. Having a sauna bath and taking a cold bath alternately is apparently good for our body, I mean doing this is really health action. If you are person who be get tired from your work and really die to take a rest, you should do it.
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I went to a hot spring today as I really wanted to feel relaxed. I actually have a lot of pain from my work everyday, and as you might know I have a routine whereby I have to work out on my day off work. So that's why I became so tired recently, and the feeling that I want to relax at a hot spring come to mind. However, where I went to today was not just a hot spring, it was also a public bath, as the Japanese call them. The public bath I went to has a hot spring as well. So besides taking a variety of baths, I could enjoy a hot spring. Okay, now listen, I will explain to you the steps involved. First things first. I washed my body, because getting dirt from me from my work or working out, into a public bath, is really inconsiderate I think. Secondly, I take a bath, but if it has an onsen (hot spring), I would head there next. Oh I've forgotten the thing I have to tell you. Having a sauna bath is a really indispensable thing for me. Doing it while taking a cold bath alternately is apparently good for our body, and doing this is really healthy. If you are a person who gets tired from your work and really yearns to take a rest, you should try it too.
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