The 244th day of 2019
Today I was close to fail my daily italki challenge. I have fogotten to pay for the internet this month. I tried to use my smartphone, but there is no such option to make notes using smartphone's browser. Then I tried my tablet and hopefuly it works! My plan for today to continue working on my new flat. Yesterday I decorated almost a half of the kitchen with the wallpaer. Today I'm going to finish it. So, let's not waste time and go...
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The 244th day of 2019
Today, I was close to failing my daily italki challenge. I had forgotten to pay for the internet this month. I tried to use my smartphone, but there is no such option to make notes using smartphone's browser. (<-- This sentence is a bit confusing. I don't understand why it would follow not paying a bill. One option would be to say "I tried to use my smartphone to pay, but there was no option to use the smartphone's browser.") Then, I tried my tablet and hopefuly it works! (This is confusing. Are you unsure your tablet will function? Will it power on?) (After reading it again, I think you meant that you were able to use your tablet to either pay your bill or get on to italki to complete the challenge. Try something like: "Then, I tried my tablet and it worked! I was able to pay my bill. [or I was able to get on italki.])
(When you begin a new subject, it's best to start a new paragraph.) My plan for today is to continue working on my new flat. Yesterday, I decorated almost half of the kitchen with wallpaper. Today, I'm going to finish it. So, let's not waste time and go!
Notes: The ending was a little awkward, but not incorrect. I think you could've ended with "Today, I'm going to finish it!" There is not need for an ending sentence like you would use in a spoken conversation. When you end a diary entry, you can just end with your thought. There is no need to wrap things up.
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The 244th day of 2019
Today I was close to failing my daily italki challenge. I had forgotten to pay for the internet this month. I tried to use my smartphone, but there is no such option to make notes using the smartphone's browser. Then I tried my tablet and hopefuly thankfully it worked! (Past tense - worked - needed to agree with "I tried") My plan for today is to continue working on my new flat. Yesterday I decorated almost a half of the kitchen with the wallpaper. Today I'm going to finish it. So, let's not waste time and go...
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