Jogging is healthy, don't you think so?
Hello everybody, this time I'm practicing the word "jogging" so, I'll try to make 5 sentences where I use it, the first sentence will be actually a paragraph. I'm very excited to see how many mistakes would I do (in the last 4 words, I'm sure there is one! But I don't know yet how to express what I wanted to express correctly).
Let's begin:
- Today I was playing a game around 6 PM, when my girlfriend got motivated to go and practice some exercise, specifically "running", she asked me to go together! And she was able to motivate me, so after all we ended trying to run from 6 PM to 7.30 PM. And I say trying, because it was the first time we did some exercise since around 2 years. So I guess jogging is a better word to describe what we did today! What do you think? Is it? I guess we'll jog every day for at least 2 weeks until we really start to run consistently. When did you jog for the last time? It will be very nice to know it!
- My girlfriend and I were jogging after we notice there was a chance of raining.
- I remember when the Sports Teacher of high school putted us too run, most of the time I was just jogging I guess.
- I'm asking myself is jogging is good to relieve stress.
- Is it possible to jog inside of supermarkets?
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Here is the last part of the correction :
My girlfriend and I were jogging after we notice there was a chance of raining.
**Correction: My girlfriend and I were jogging when we noticed that there might be a chance of rain.
- I'm asking myself is jogging is good to relieve stress.
Correction : I wonder if jogging is a good way to relieve stress.
*saying, “I wonder” is the correct way to express, “I am asking myself”
- Is it possible to jog inside of supermarkets?
- there is no mistake in this sentence! (:
I hope this helps!
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I was playing a game around 6 PM, when my girlfriend got motivated to go to practice some exercise, specifically "running", she asked me to go together!
- correction : - I was playing a game at about 6 pm tonight when my girlfriend got motivated to exercise. She asked me to go running with her!
And she was able to motivate me, so after all we ended trying to run from 6 PM to 7.30 PM. And I say trying, because it was the first time we did some exercise since around 2 years. So I guess jogging is a better word to describe what we did today! What do you think? Is it?
*i made some changes to help it read better and still hopefully get your message across* please message me if you have questions! Great job.
Correction: My girlfriend inspired me, so we planned to try to go for a run from 6 Pm to 7:30 pm. I used the word, “try” because my girlfriend and I have not exercised for two years. I think that, “Jogging” is a better word to describe what we did today, do you agree?
*the word, “inspired” in this sentence, means the same as the word “motivated” .
I guess we'll jog every day for at least 2 weeks until we really start to run consistently. When did you jog for the last time? It will be very nice to know it!) * great job here! I just made a couple changes, again to make it easier to follow for the reader.
Correction: We plan to jog every day for at least 2 weeks until we really start to run consistently. When was the last time you jogged ? I would really like to know!
- I remember when the Sports Teacher of high school putted us too run, most of the time I was just jogging I guess.
Correction : My high-school sports teacher used to ask us to run, but most of the time I just jogged.
*”sports teacher” does not need to be capitalized. Only the teachers actual name would be capitalized . For example , My high-school teacher, James, used to ask us to run.
*again , please feel free to message with questions!
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Jogging is healthy, don't you think so?
Here "so" isn't exactly incorrect but normally with a question we wouldn't add the "so" if you've already introduced a precedent, in this case "jogging".
Hello everybody, this time I'm practicing the word "jogging" so, I'll try to make 5 sentences where I use it, the first sentence will be actually a paragraph. I'm very excited to see how many mistakes would I'll make (in the last 4 words, I'm sure there is one! But I don't know yet how to express what I wanted to express correctly).
Make a mistake: mistake goes with "make" I wrote a blog post on the difference between make and do which you can check out here for more examples: https://cloverenglish.org/do-or-make/ :) (it's a tricky thing for students and takes some practice and memorizing)
Let's begin:
- Today I was playing a game around 6 PM, when my girlfriend got motivated to go and practice do some exercise
With determiners like "some" we're going to use "do" more than anything (again I've written about this in my blog post)
, specifically "running", she asked me to go together! And she was able to motivate me, so after all in the end we ended up trying to run from 6 PM to 7.30 PM. And I say trying, because it was the first time we had done some exercise since in around 2 years.
Si quieres decir "acabamos intentando correr desde las 6 hasta...." hay que tener un cuenta que en inglés necesitamos el phrasal verb "end up" para expresar esto no vale con "end" solo.
So I guess jogging is a better word to describe what we did today! What do you think? Is it? I guess we'll jog every day for at least 2 weeks until we really start to run consistently. When did you jog for the last time?
This structure isn't too bad but in English we'd say more "When was the last time you went jogging?"
It will be very nice to know it!
- My girlfriend and I were jogging then after we noticed there was a chance of raining rain (here you need the noun)
I remember when our high school PE teacher made us run
Si alguien te obliga a hacer algo utilizamos "make" en inglés. Y también "put" es irregular así que en el pasado no cambia (put, put y put)
- I'm asking myself if jogging is good to relieve stress.
- Is it possible to jog inside of supermarkets? Inside doesn't need a preposition "We are inside the building" sin mas :)
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Jogging is healthy, don't you think so?
Hello everybody, this time I'm practicing the word "jogging", so, I'll try to make 5 sentences where I use it, the first sentence will be actually actually be a paragraph. I'm very excited to see how many mistakes would I do I make(in the last 4 words, I'm sure there is one! But I don't know yet how to express what I wanted to express correctly (But I don't... This sentence is technically correct but sounds odd, I would say: "I still don't know how to express this idea correctly in English").
Let's begin:
- Today I was playing a game around 6 PM, when my girlfriend got motivated to go and practice some exercise to excercise, specifically she wanted to run "running", she asked me to go with her together! And she was able to motivate convince me, so after all we ended up trying to run from 6 PM to 7.30 PM. And I say trying, because it was the first time we did some any exercise since around about 2 years ago. So I guess jogging is a better word to describe what we did today! What do you think? Is it? I guess we'll jog every day for at least 2 weeks until we really are ready to start to run consistently. When did you jog for the last time? It will would be very nice to know it!
- My girlfriend and I were jogging after we notice there was a chance of raining. (not sure what idea you are trying to express -- See below for 3 options, first is that the jog is complete and in the past, the second is the jog is in progress, the third assumes you have not yet started to jog)
My girlfriend and I went jogging after we noticed there was a chance of rain.
My girlfriend and I are jogging because we noticed there was a chance of rain later.
My girlfriend and I are going to jog now because we noticed there is a chance of rain later.
- I remember when the Sports Teacher of high school putted us too run, most of the time I was just jogging I guess.
I remember when the physical education teach from high school had us run that most of the time I was only jogging.
- I'm asking myself is jogging is good to relieve stress.
I wonder if jogging is a good way to relieve stress
- Is it possible to jog inside of supermarkets? (Possible --- do you mean "allowed to happen" or physically possible? - I assumed allowed to happen)
Are you allowed to jog inside of supermarkets?
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