personal intent
I chose to study medicine since high school. At that time, I was deeply influenced by American TV shows such as Grey’s Anatomy. I thought being a doctor helping people fight against death is such a sacred career that I admire. I was inspired by their enthusiasm and decided to be a physician as devoted as them. In the summer of 2016, I volunteered at the Beijing First Aid Center to help the doctors pick up patients, and examine vital signs. I can still remember there was a silent night. We went to pick up an old man whose wife called the First Aid Center to send her weak husband to hospital. But when we reached her home, the doctor took a simple examination of the old man and told his wife, ‘he’s leaving’. I can still remember there were several apples on the table, and a cup of water, maybe no difference with before. The woman kept silent for a moment and spoke to herself, “he just said he’d like to sleep with the window open tonight”. I held back my tears. Then I thought maybe we couldn’t predict when people would leave, there were people leaving every day. But I just want to do something, more than noting. I believe I have made the greatest choice to become a doctor.
During the time studying in medical school, I am a student of good character and Scholarship. Above all the medical courses, I found myself absorbed in Internal Medicine. During my time at Peking University People’s Hospital, every day after rounds, attending doctors would show us some completed cases and we discussed the differential diagnoses together. I felt totally absorbed in the amazing world of medicine every time. The brain storms were just like magic! Using all kinds of materials to figure out a problem is always exciting. I then finally found Internal Medicine my true love.
“It takes more than medical school to become a physician”. Therefore, to enhance my competitiveness in Internal Medicine, I enthusiastically learned a lot of materials in my spared time and passed my USMLE step1 examination with a score of 262. I also took part in scientific researches and write a review about the clinical significance of appendiceal orifice lesions in ulcerative colitis and a case report based on an ulcerative colitis patient with appendiceal orifice lesions and appendiceal tumor, not yet submitted.
As for the language levels, I got 106 scores in TOEFL. I never stop practicing my English, and I can see my spoken English improving day by day.
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personal intent
I chose to study medicine back in high school. At that time, I was deeply influenced by American TV shows such as Grey’s Anatomy. I thought being a doctor helping people fight against death was such a sacred career that I admired. I was inspired by their enthusiasm and decided to be a physician as devoted as them. In the summer of 2016, I volunteered at the Beijing First Aid Center to help the doctors pick up patients, and examine vital signs. I can still remember there was a silent night. We went to pick up an old man whose wife called the First Aid Center to send her weak husband to hospital. But when we reached her home, the doctor took a simple examination of the old man and told his wife, "he’s leaving". I can still remember. There were several apples on the table, and a cup of water, maybe no difference with before (我不明白). The woman kept silent for a moment and spoke to herself, “he just said he’d like to sleep with the window open tonight”. I held back my tears. Then I thought maybe we couldn’t predict when people would leave, there were people leaving every day. But I just want to do something, more than nothing. I believe I have made the greatest choice by becoming a doctor.
During my time studying in medical school, I was a student of good character and Scholarship. Out of all the medical courses, I found myself most absorbed with Internal Medicine. During my time at Peking University People’s Hospital, every day after rounds, attending doctors would show us some completed cases and we discussed the differential diagnoses together. I felt totally absorbed in the amazing world of medicine every time. The brainstorms were just like magic! Using all kinds of materials to figure out a problem is always exciting. I then finally found Internal Medicine, my true love.
“It takes more than medical school to become a physician”. Therefore, to enhance my competitiveness in Internal Medicine, I enthusiastically learned a lot of materials in my spare time and passed my USMLE step1 examination with a score of 262. I also took part in scientific research and wrote a review about the clinical significance of appendiceal orifice lesions in ulcerative colitis and a case report based on a ulcerative colitis patient with appendiceal orifice lesions and an appendiceal tumor, not yet submitted.
As for the language levels, I got a106 score in TOEFL. I never stop practicing my English, and I can see my spoken English improving day by day.
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我小的时候也想是医生,但是在美国去医学院是太贵还有太难.
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No es: 106 puntajes.
Es: 106 puntos.
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No es: del apéndice.
Es: de la apéndice.
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No es: de caso basado.
Es: de un caso basado.
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No se puede escribir: "soy un estudiante de buen carácter y beca.
Sería: soy un estudiante de buen carácter y con una beca.
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