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Spring has just come. A new castle has been built and graph's family hurries to carry own things. There are houses for maids in space of the castle. If they finish for a week, this will be very good! Because there is much work! Need to transfer heavy furniture: tables, armchairs, mirrors, cupboards. The graph's family has moved to the new castle because their old castle had been burned. If they didn't anger your neighbours, they wouldn't move. But spring is a good time for a new life. You can start more exercising, more reading, more talking with your family. That is more matter there isn't any church in the region. Graph's wife said "If I hadn't necessary, I wouldn't move!", but the graph is glad. He is as the pioneer in the new place! Graph's maids also are glad. There is time for dinner of the graph's family in the picture, so we aren't seeing them. But simple peoples cannot stop working, they have to go on continuing. There are peoples in the wall who are guarding the building and some children who are playing. Summer is near and the graph's family waits for it, they have been heard that summer is very good in this region.
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I have described a picture!
Spring has just come. A new castle has been built and graph's the count's family hurries to carry own their things. There are houses for maids in space of the castle. If they finish for in a week, this will be very good! Because there is much work! They need to transfer heavy furniture: tables, armchairs, mirrors, cupboards. The graph's count's family has moved to the new castle because their old castle had been has been (or was) burned. If they didn't anger your hadn't angered their neighbours, they wouldn't need to move. But spring is a good time for a new life. You can start exercising more, reading more, talking with your family more. That is more matter What matters more is that there isn't any church in the region. Graph's The count's wife said "If I hadn't necessary, I didn't need to, I wouldn't move!", but the count is glad. He is as the like a pioneer in the a new place! The count's maids are also glad. There is time for dinner of the graph's family It is time for dinner for the count's family in the picture, so we aren't seeing don't see them in the picture. But simple peoples people cannot stop working, they have to go on continuing continue. There are peoples people in on the wall who are guarding the building and some children who are playing. Summer is near and the graph's family waits for it, they have been heard that summer is very good in this region.
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