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Introducing myself Hello guys, My name is Ahmed but you can call me Moneim. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Egypt and live in Alex city . I've graduated from Alex university, faculty of commerce, accounting department in 2015. I have been working as a procurement specialist for a constructions company since 2016. I don't like my Job so I search for a good opportunity in accounting field which I have studied with a high salary to achieve all my goals. My hobbies are chess, swimming, walking and traveling.I like making friends from different countries to exchange information about our customs and traditions. Eventually I have a dream to travel around the world, I believe in I can make it true one day. Good bye :))

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Introducing myself

Hello guys, My name is Ahmed but you can call me Moneim. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Egypt and live in Alex city . I've graduated from Alex University in 2015, faculty department of with a degree in commerce business and accounting department. I have been working as a procurement specialist for a constructions company since 2016. I don't like my job so I am searching for a good opportunity in the accounting field which I have studied with a high salary to achieve all my goals. My hobbies are chess, swimming, walking and traveling. I like making friends from different countries to exchange information about our customs and traditions. I have a dream to travel around the world, I believe in I can eventually make it true one day.

Good bye :))

[Well done, well written, only minor errors. I changed the sentence about graduation to reflect American common language, which would be difficult for you to know. We say we studied a subject, i.e., accounting; or we received a degree in a subject if you graduated, i.e., business; or we work in a department, i.e., I am a professor of biology in the science department.]


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Introducing myself

Hello guys, My name is Ahmed but you can call me Moneim. I'm 26 years old and I'm from Egypt, I live in the city of Alexandria. I graduated from Alexandria University - the faculty of commerce and accounting. I've been working as a procurement specialist for a construction company since 2016. I don't like my job, so I'm searching for a good opportunity in the accounting field; a subject I have studied, which will offer a higher salary to achieve all of my goals. My hobbies are chess, swimming, walking and travelling. I like making friends from different countries to exchange information about our customs and traditions. I have a dream to travel around the world, I believe I can eventually make it come true.
Good bye :))
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Introducing myself

Hello guys, Mmy name is Ahmed, but you can call me Moneim. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Egypt and live in Alex cCity . I've graduated from Alex uUniversity, fFaculty of cCommerce, accounting department in 2015. I have been working as a procurement specialist for a constructions company since 2016. I don't like my Jjob, so I've been searching for a good opportunity in the accounting field which I have studied with a high salary to (I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say here. Maybe you are trying to say that you heard that the accounting field pays high salaries.) achieve all my goals. My hobbies are chess, swimming, walking, and traveling. I like making friends from different countries to exchange information about our customs and traditions. Eventually, I have a dream to travel around the world,. I believe in I can make it true one day.
Good bye :))

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