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Get to work ! Hi, friend. I will talk about how I get to work today with you . I usually get up early at half past six in the morning. After breakfast and making up, I leave my home at 8 o'clock. It take about 6 minutes to walk to the JinShahu subway station from my house. The subway is so fast. Even the DaTieguan subway station is about 20 kilometers from the JinShahu subway station, It only take 25 minutes. I need to walk to the company when I get to the DaTieguan subway station. If the weather is good I must take 15 minutes to get to the company by walk. But if it is rainy then I need to take about 20 minutes.

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Get to work!

Hi, friend. I will talk about how I get to work today with you Today I will tell you about how I get to work.
I usually get up early at half past six in the morning. After breakfast and making up putting on makeup, I leave my home at 8 o'clock. It take about 6 minutes to walk to the JinShahu subway station from my house. The subway is so fast. Even the though DaTieguan subway station is about 20 kilometers from the JinShahu subway station, It only takes 25 minutes.
I need to walk to the company when I get to the DaTieguan subway station. If the weather is good I must take 15 minutes to get to the company by walk foot. But if it is rainy then I need to take about 20 minutes.


*** Well done with your composition Arya, I hope my corrections help!
In English, we can talk about different kinds of transport by saying: by foot, by train, by car, by plane etc.
For example, "He went by plane" or "I get to the station by foot."

Have a great day :)

Lyndsay
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Can someone here help me revise my English composition ? Thank you so much.

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