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Hometown Hometown is the only Like mother is unique Hometown if you don’t associate with. You couldn’t be a completed person. In the harvest time of my place, yellow straws of rice cover all the country roads, it releases soft sweet smell through small village, the smell of sunshine of rain, and has a little smell of dried weather mixing with smell of milk in rice flower. The heavy chain of rice is result of rice tree after it dedicates whole its life. This is the time farmers bring rice bundles to their home with happiness, gratitude and hope. Happiness because family members’ stomach are fulfilled. Hope a better life towards. Gratitude to mother Earth because she brings to them living germ. I would love to spend whole life at my homeland but to survive in this life I can’t do it. Sometime I have to move on. Inspire of that I always engage with my hometown wherever I go. Can you tell me about your home town?

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Hometown

A hometown is
Like a mother is unique.
If a hometown you are without
You cannot be a complete person.

In the harvest time of at my place, yellow straws of rice cover all the country roads. It releases a soft sweet smell throughout the small village, with the smell of sunshine of rain in sunshine, and has a little smell scent of dried weather mixing with a smell of milk in rice flowers. The heavy chain of rice is the result of the rice tree after it dedicates has dedicated its whole its life.
This is the time farmers bring rice bundles to their homes with happiness, gratitude and hope. Happiness because family members’ stomaches are fulfilled. Hope looking towards a better life towards. Gratitude to mother Earth because she brings to them living germ life.
I would love to spend my whole life at my homeland but to survive in this life I can’t do it. Sometimes I have to move on. Inspire of that Inspired by this, I always engage with my new hometown wherever I go. Can you tell me about your home town?


Mostly corrected plurals and articles, and reorganized a couple sentences
Very descriptive!
My family moved many times since I was young, I don't have hometowns, just memories of my places on my journey.

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