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Place of strength If you was born in really beautiful place like a small village with a lot of green trees or a cozy city with a lake, you can understand my feelings when I return to motherland. I am lucky because i was born in a really clean, small, cosh city which located in Siberia region between two rivers and the mountains around. It is really comfortable and safety place because the mountains protects us from the winds and the pollutions from neighbour cities. Also our rivers starts from the mountains so it is clean water. All citizens love summer period here because we have the opportunity to sail on the river in inflatable boats. If you will sail on the boat you would see a very beatiful view! A lot of green trees and mountain's flowers, raspberries on the slopes. Water in the river is transparent and you could see fishes. Near moutain you can watch the seagulls and the big predatory eagles. They fly around and sometimes fly down to water to catch small fishes. Yesterday i have had the opportunity to meet my friend and to sail on boat with her. It was so relaxful to travel on the river! I know that in every county, city and village people have some special, buatiful place wheare love to relax citizens and I glad to share. Tell me about your place of strength?

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Place of strength

If you were born in really beautiful place like a small village with a lot of green trees or a cozy city with a lake, you can understand my feelings when I return to my motherland (смысл понял, но я хочу сказать, что анлглоязычние равняют motherland с Российским государством. Лучше звучит - home-town, birth-place).

I am lucky because i was born in a really clean, small, cozy city which is located in Siberia region between two rivers and the mountains around. It is a really comfortable and safety place because the mountains protects (подлежащее - единсвенное число) us from the winds and the pollutions (pollution всегда единственное число) from neighbour cities. Also, our rivers start (подлежащее многочисленное.) in the mountains so it is clean water.

All citizens love the summer period here because we have the opportunity to sail on the river in inflatable boats. If you were to sail on a boat, you would see a very beautiful view! A lot of green trees and mountain's flowers, raspberries on the slopes. Water in the river is transparent and you can see fishes. Near the mountain you can watch the seagulls and the big predatory eagles. They fly around and sometimes fly/swoop лучше down to the water to catch small fishes.

Yesterday I have had the opportunity to meet my friend and to sail on boat with her. It was so relaxing to travel on the river! I know that in every county, city and village people have some special, beautiful place where they love to relax. My countrymen and I are glad to share. Tell me about your place of strength?
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Спасибо, попробую 😊
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Пожалуйста, только я вам не очень-то и помог, если только советом. Практический смысл имеет исправить 1-2-3 ошибки, но не больше. Попробуйте написать поменьше и повнимательнее, англичане здесь реально помогают)
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Misha, спасибо :)
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Англичане что-то ленятся, подниму ваш пост, мб, все исправят. Вы бы чуть попроще писали, потому что много ошибок получается с артиклями (It is A really comfortable and safe place), согласованием подлежащего со сказуемым (the mountains protect … rivers start), выбором слов ( a comfortable and safe (NOT safety) place) и по структуре предложений (Our rivers begin in the mountains, so the water is clean)

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