please correct my sentences, thanks so much
today the company planed to fire a worker, he is already 57 years old, when I talked with him, found that his worried about his
later life, he think that he couldn't find another job , he still wanted to stay in the company, but it couldn't be come ture, the only thing he could do is to make a compensation negotiation with company
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please correct my sentences, thanks so much
today the company planed to fire a worker, he is already 57 years old, when I talked with him, found that his worried about his
later life, he think that he couldn't find another job , he still wanted to stay in the company, but it couldn't be come ture, the only thing he could do is to make a compensation negotiation with company
Today the company has fired a worker. He already is 57 years old and when I talk to him I found that he is worried about his upcoming life. He thinks that he is not going to be able to find another job. He still wanted to stay in the company but this is not going to happen. The only thing he can do is negotiating a compensation with the company.
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Please correct my sentences, thanks so much
Today the company planned to fire a worker, he is already 57 years old. When I talked with him, I found that he is worried about his
future. He thinks that he couldn't find another job and he still wanted to stay in the company. But it won't come true, the only thing he can do is to negotiate compensation with the company.
Interesting but sad story. Please remember that in English every sentence begins with a capital (big) letter. Full stops (periods) are used at the end of a complete idea.
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please correct my sentences, thanks so much.
today the company planned to fire a worker, he is already 57 years old, when I talked with him, I found out that his he was worried about the future his later life, he thinks that he couldn't won't be able to find another job. he still wanted to stay in at the company, but it wasn't possible couldn't be come ture, the only thing he could do is to make a compensation negotiation with the company
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